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I love this poem. I love it because it actually shows what fame is like. It expresses the good and bad of what fame is. It tells how fame betrays you and how it helps you. I would reccomend this poem to everyone I know. I really enjoyed this and I hope to read more of your work in the future, so don't stop writing.
hey,
so i really liked your work
but there were some things here and there i'd like to point.
".........transition from one form" this line seems incomplete i think it should be "from one form to another"
in the next stanza
"darkness cover it", i think you meant "darkness covers* it"
"fame is powers" should be "fame is power"
else your poems amazing, good luck !
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WHOA. Just whoa... this is amazingly written and it also brings up a good point!
Fame IS a delusion. I love how you describe it and make it into a poem! Great job!