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Re: Envy
This poem is so beautiful. I can really feel how you felt about her. It just reminds me on how I felt about this guy even though he didn't feel ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Sick Day
I really enjoyed this poem. I really admired the detail you put in it. I also enjoyed how you did not put a rhyme scheme and that it was free ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Moments
This poem was so cute! I loved it so much! It made me relate back with my boyfriend. I really enjoy the rhyme scheme because it kept the poem flowing. ...
Jul 8, 2013 -
Re: This Girl
I liked this poem. This poem is very realistic and had emotion to it. While I was reading it reminded me of me in a way. I only have 1 ...
Aug 23, 2012 -
Re: To Someone I Have Not Yet Met
i enjoyed this poem. I thought it had a lot of emotion and I could understand it completely. I am actually happy that you wrote this is a sonnet format. ...
Aug 23, 2012 -
Re: Soul of Fame
I love this poem. I love it because it actually shows what fame is like. It expresses the good and bad of what fame is. It tells how fame betrays ...
Aug 17, 2012 -
Re: Once
I really enjoyed this poem. You could actually feel the emotion that was put inside it. My favorite stanza from this poem was the last one. I liked that one ...
Aug 17, 2012 -
Re: A Whispered Lullaby
I loved your personification of the sun and of the soul. It was like the poem was setting a scene and that the scene wasn't even starting to take form. ...
Aug 8, 2012 -
Re: The Place I Love
I think this poem has a lot of emotion inside of it which I love. It is like you can feel this emotion in many ways and it lightens your ...
Aug 8, 2012 -
Re: mo(u)rning
I enjoyed your sense of detail in the story. I also think that if you wanted to you can actually make this poem into a short story. I liked that ...
Aug 8, 2012 -
Re: Laugh-Lines
I really like your poem. When it talked about the forehead, I completely understood it. I especially like that your poem does not talk about the good things of getting ...
Aug 8, 2012 -
Re: The First Time
I really liked your poem. In your poem I could really feel the emotion that was in it in real life. I also liked you rhyme which which had made ...
Jul 12, 2012 -
Re: Cinderella
Sorry to tell you but, I didn't really enjoy it. I couldn't really understand the message you were trying to put in the poem. I also think you should have ...
Jul 12, 2012 -
Re: Ghosts: Chapter 1
I liked how the story is really creative.I think that you should you don't in info thta doesn't connect to the story. I also liked the usage of detail. I ...
Jul 12, 2012
