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Re: Station.
This is one of the most well written things I've ever read. That was so deep and I felt like I lived this through you just reding it once. I've ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Insensible
Hey! Here for a review. Firstly, I like this poem a lot! I wasn't sure where you were going with it at first, but then I got it! This is ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: christmas kisses on your mouth
This is short, but so sweet! I think it tells a story of a short moment which had a bigger memory, and lasting impact. That's the good thing about poetry, ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Fix my heart...
This poem is.. SO GREAT!! I can relate to all you said here so much, it's kinda scary! I wrote a poem and story similar if you want to take ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Another Dead Man Walking
Wow, this is an interesting poem! I wasn't sure what it was supposed to be about at first, bit I finally grasped it at the end. In my poems, I ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Masengesho Rodrigue: My sponsor Child.
That's an inspiring and intriguing story Jack! You really made me think in the end about how selfish we privileged people really are. I never knew one third of the ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: There's Always War
This. Poem. Is. The. BEST!!! Ok, I think I like this so much because I can totally, TOTALLY relate to how you feel! I wrote my own poem similar to ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Delete
Wow! This is intense for such a short poem! I like to start my poetry views off with explanations. Firstly, I could feel the emotion in this as I read ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: [deleted]
Cool poem! It has a unique title too! I have one thing though. Your poem is good and you have good imagery of "Purple Skittle Girl", but I think you ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: OMIT
This is a really deep poem, I can see you put a lot of effort into it. Your wordings seem good, but I think you could space it out a ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: [deleted]
Great poem!! I loved how you took something that already happened and retold it like that! If only I could turn in all my papers as poems, creepily, I'm always ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Yet Another YWS Birthday Poem
First off, let me say: wow. Your poem held so much meaning in just a bit of space on paper! Your wording was fantastic and you stanzas were so intricate. ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Snake
Short but simple is what I often hear about many things. This too is one of them. I also must say when I write my reviews, I like to explain ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: The Warrior
Hi! So I start off my poetry reviews with a bit of an explanation. So, to me, poetry is great because people can all take away different meanings. So poems ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: The Lighthouse
This poem is fantastic! In poetry, I believe we can still tell a story, but play with the words more and make someone thing. Poetry can also represent different things ...
Nov 14, 2014
