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  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Station.

    This is one of the most well written things I've ever read. That was so deep and I felt like I lived this through you just reding it once. I've ...

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Insensible

    Hey! Here for a review. Firstly, I like this poem a lot! I wasn't sure where you were going with it at first, but then I got it! This is ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: christmas kisses on your mouth

    This is short, but so sweet! I think it tells a story of a short moment which had a bigger memory, and lasting impact. That's the good thing about poetry, ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Fix my heart...

    This poem is.. SO GREAT!! I can relate to all you said here so much, it's kinda scary! I wrote a poem and story similar if you want to take ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Another Dead Man Walking

    Wow, this is an interesting poem! I wasn't sure what it was supposed to be about at first, bit I finally grasped it at the end. In my poems, I ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Literature, Culture Re: Masengesho Rodrigue: My sponsor Child.

    That's an inspiring and intriguing story Jack! You really made me think in the end about how selfish we privileged people really are. I never knew one third of the ...

    Nov 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: There's Always War

    This. Poem. Is. The. BEST!!! Ok, I think I like this so much because I can totally, TOTALLY relate to how you feel! I wrote my own poem similar to ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Delete

    Wow! This is intense for such a short poem! I like to start my poetry views off with explanations. Firstly, I could feel the emotion in this as I read ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: [deleted]

    Cool poem! It has a unique title too! I have one thing though. Your poem is good and you have good imagery of "Purple Skittle Girl", but I think you ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: OMIT

    This is a really deep poem, I can see you put a lot of effort into it. Your wordings seem good, but I think you could space it out a ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: [deleted]

    Great poem!! I loved how you took something that already happened and retold it like that! If only I could turn in all my papers as poems, creepily, I'm always ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Yet Another YWS Birthday Poem

    First off, let me say: wow. Your poem held so much meaning in just a bit of space on paper! Your wording was fantastic and you stanzas were so intricate. ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Snake

    Short but simple is what I often hear about many things. This too is one of them. I also must say when I write my reviews, I like to explain ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Warrior

    Hi! So I start off my poetry reviews with a bit of an explanation. So, to me, poetry is great because people can all take away different meanings. So poems ...

    Nov 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Lighthouse

    This poem is fantastic! In poetry, I believe we can still tell a story, but play with the words more and make someone thing. Poetry can also represent different things ...

    Nov 14, 2014


I'm also not sure why but even though I normally wear cool tones I have a feeling red would have been my color in the 1860s.
— Elinor