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I have never read Gone, but I have read the other two, and I've got to say... I completely agree. Mortal Instruments got on my nerves so fast, and I ...

Hello, me again. Let's get started!! I loved this chapter so much!! I was captivated the entire time and I can't wait to see what happens next. Nitpicks: everything my ...

Hello, mordax back again! Let's get started... So, don't want to be redundant with my review comments, but "show don't tell"... There are a few simple ways you can do ...

mordax back again!! Let's get started... So, I loved this chapter more so than the first, honestly. I am beginning to get a better grasp on how their magic, or ...

Hi there! I'm going to be honest and say I haven't looked at any of the other reviews, so if I repeat anything, I apologize. Let's get started! I loved ...

Hi again! Well, you know me, so let's get started. Right now his hands were hurting or in pain at all. In fact, he could barely feel any difference. I'm ...

Hello again! cocked her head and meet his gaze. "met" not "meet" as it is past tense. Wide. Open. I understand wanting emphasis here, but I think that could be ...

Hello, Mordax again. I'm just going to be spamming you with reviews today because I have missed so many chapters. Let's jump right in! from a client to follow that ...

Hello again! Mordax here with a review. To start off, wonderful job on this story! I will be sprinkling in suggestions and compliments throughout, so let's get started. First off: ...

Hello! I loved this poem so much!! My favorite lines were the first two and it really drew me. I have very few critiques, but here they are: First off, ...

Wow, I loved this poem! I have very little critique, but let's get to it. Obviously, you may have chosen this for a formatting choice, but I would've liked to ...

I cannot put into words how much I love this poem. There's not a single thing I would change if I could, and I could read it over and over ...

Wow! I love this concept and your imagery and wording! There are only a few things I have suggestions, so let's jump into it... I can feel the wisps of ...

I only recently fell in love with poetry, and your poem displays the reasons why. Words can be used in so many ways, and your poem utilizes them in such ...

Wow!!! I absolutely love this poem. So. Much. The only thing I could possibly critique on is not grouping the last lines into stanzas. While I'm guessing you separated them ...