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Re: Aether's Heart 8.1
Hi again! I think we can skip introductions, and I apologize for the small delay on this review, I was hoping to get it all done in one go but ...
Jun 10, 2021 -
Re: Aether's Heart 7
Hey there, Mordax here with a review!! I'm so excited for these new updates, so catch me hopping over to your following chapters right after this! Okay, let's get right ...
Jun 10, 2021 -
Re: To Sit on the Edge of the Moon
Hey there! Mordax here for a review. First off, I love your imagery and wording. It truly is lyrical and beautiful. I do recommend, however, breaking up your stanzas into ...
May 26, 2021 -
Re: The Sandy Shores of the Beach
Hey there, Mordax with a review! Okay, this poem is so good. I always love water imagery and you delivered spectacularly. So let's get into it... And yet the splashing ...
May 26, 2021 -
Re: [Some things are obvious]
Hi there, Mordax here with a review! First off, I love your formatting for this poem! It flows beautifully and has that lyrical feel that I love about poetry. I ...
May 26, 2021 -
Re: cruelty is genetic
Hi there, mordax here for a review! So to start off, I loved this poem. The title already hooked me in and that first stanza... omg, absolutely amazing. I am ...
May 7, 2021 -
Re: Passover
Hey there, mordax here with a review! So the title, Passover, as I know is a Jewish holiday (I think?) but I am not well educated on it and thus ...
May 7, 2021 -
Re: My Life Poem
Hey there!! Just hopped on to review! I love your poem, btw, I relate to it so hard, especially the idea of wanting to please everyone even though it's impossible. ...
May 6, 2021 -
Re: Dragonslaying is Not a Viable Career Path
Hello there! Mordax here for a review. Um.... Wow!!! I loved this poem. No, seriously, this poem is absolutely amazing. When I started reading it, I already knew I was ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: We Lift Our Burdens
Hello, mordax here with another review! I am continuously impressed by your talent! I love this poem so much, and it might be my favorite yet that I've read from ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: The Nightmare Begging
Hi there, mordax here with a review!! First off, I loved this poem! I love the message of it and honestly, the title. It was what hooked me in and ...
Apr 21, 2021 -
Re: Dear, the one I fell for
Hi there!! Mordax here with a review. Um..... Wow!!! I love this poem so much. It has such a beautiful and unique flow that just rolls so smoothly off the ...
Apr 21, 2021 -
Re: Black Hand's Ticking Claws
Hi there, mordax here! I loved this poem and found it really interesting. I read it through a few times and viewed it differently each time. I have no critiques ...
Apr 15, 2021 -
Re: Cursed Blessing
Ooooooooh I love this poem! I love how you formatted it, showing the facade that's displayed vs. the inner monologue which instantly contrasts it. Dear Friend (Ex Lover), I found ...
Apr 15, 2021 -
Re: A Dance That Never Was
Hi there! Mordax here with a review. To start off, I absolutely loved this poem. I love the flow you established and the meaning behind it--this love that never was ...
Apr 15, 2021
