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  • Poetry » General, General Re: We only go as far as we walk

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review! Let's get started: First off, I loved this poem! It was a lament to this lost relationship, and you conveyed this hopelessness well. ...

    Jul 28, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: MTOHS - Chapter 5

    Hey there, Mordax here with another review! Let's get started. I didn’t actually bother listening to them—it was just something work related—but I wanted to be the one seated next ...

    Jul 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Maths

    Hey there! Mordax here for a review, so let's get started! First off, I love how you used math in this poem. You start off with this repetition of the ...

    Jul 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: lve letter frm a brken keybard

    Hey there! Mordax here for a review! Okay so..... I really loved this poem. A lot. Like... a lot. I love how you formatted it and would have been drawn ...

    Jul 13, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: MTOHS - Chapter 4.2

    Hey again! Let's skip all introductions and whatnot because we just covered that last chapter, lol. So, here we go! Grey noticed, seeming a bit disappointed to see me go, ...

    Jul 13, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: MTOHS - Chapter 4.1

    Hey there! Sorry for the wait on this review but here I am! To be honest, I haven't taken a look at the other reviews, so if I repeat anything, ...

    Jul 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Rewind

    Hi there, Mordax here for a review! I would be lying if I said I wasn't dragged in by Eleanor Rigby alone. I love the Beatles so much and I'm ...

    Jun 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: crushed

    Hey there, Mordax here for a review!! Let's get started... First off, I love this poem. It is so heavy and hauntingly beautiful. I totally understand that feeling of life ...

    Jun 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Treasure hunting

    Hey there, mordax here with a review! Let's get started. Blue shades of red I love this. It seems a bit backwards yet it makes so much sense to me ...

    Jun 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: Forever - Part Two - The Captive

    Hey there, me again! Let's get started! "Hold it!" Emma froze. I would suggest having this part of dialogue as its own paragraph to avoid confusion with who is saying ...

    Jun 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Forever - Part One - The Farewell

    Hey there! I liked your later chapter and was intrigued so here I am for the others. the city of Gotham spread before me. Ohhhhhh okayyyyy yesssss Gotham, I'm hyped. ...

    Jun 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Forever - Part Three - The Caped Figure

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review!! Forewarning, I haven't read any of your other chapters, so I will be a bit lost as to the plot so my review ...

    Jun 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Night Sky

    Hey there, Mordax here with a review!! Btw, I loveeee this poem, so this review will be speckled with critiques and appreciations. Sometimes when I stare into the moon Here, ...

    Jun 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: You've got no Brains

    Hey there, mordax here! Loved this poem, so let's get to it! I'm lack that skill I think you mean "I lack that skill" I'm angry too And thus defiant ...

    Jun 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Aether's Heart 8.2

    Hey again! Mordax here! Let's-a-go! “And that’s when I realized that hey, this guy’s not old at all! He just dresses that way to be fashionable,” Paimon said, poking out ...

    Jun 11, 2021


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