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  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Poet in Passing

    Hey tupa42! Michaeld here for a review. Overall, this was quite an enjoyable read! It describes very well the love/hate relationship us writers (and most artists in general) have with ...

    May 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: My Perfect Pet

    Hey Horisun! Michaeld here for a quick review. Overall, I thought this was a cute and short poem with a nice twist at the end. It does need a bit ...

    May 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: shoddy construction

    Hey there, introworded! michaeld here, hope you're having a good one so far. Just wanted to say a few things about this delightful poem you've shared. Firstly, I thoroughly enjoyed ...

    Jul 4, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Simple Truths

    Hey HopeofDecember! Happy Independence Day (if you're American :P)! Overall, I do think that this poem was nice. It was cute, short, and entertaining to read. But there were a ...

    Jul 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: On Being Content with Only Scraping the Sky

    Hey indieeloise! It's been months and months (maybe even a year...) since I've been on YWS, but I'm back and ready to review! First of all, I really enjoyed this ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Bolognese Sandwiches

    Hello, Cadi! Michaeld here to review for you! This piece was completely and utterly amazing! It kept my interest the whole way through which is impressive, given that my attention ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Damned Soliloquy

    Hey there Confictura, First of all, this was a nice piece. It seemed to be well thought out and was executed fairly well. There are a few things that need ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: From Father to Son

    Master_Yoda, (Awesome username, by the way!) This was phenomenal. This piece makes my poem seem like a speck of dust! Your imagery was amazing, your word choice mesmerizing and the ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Legacy

    Hello there MaxZero1496, In general, I don't like rhyming poems, but this piece was quite entertaining. The reason I dislike poetry that rhymes is because a lot of the time ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Therefore Pursue Me Not

    probablynot, Overall, this was a very nice, quaint piece. The imagery was nice and so was the diction. I don't know if I would necessarily file it under "poetry" though... ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Elephant Boy {one}

    I am left speechless, Kylan. This was absolutely enchanting. I have tried so hard to pull off what you have produced, but in vain. You, my friend, are talented. From ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: America two dollars and twenty-seven cents January 17, 1956.

    This was simply wonderful! It gave me a sense of nostalgia and homesickness. That was quite impressive of you! Very good. There are only two things that I found slightly ...

    Feb 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 33%

    Aley, First of all, I would like to congratulate you on this piece. I really liked reading it! It was a very interesting concept and I would like to know ...

    Feb 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Nothing is ever certain

    Clarity, I really enjoyed reading this piece. It left some very thought-provoking ideas lingering within my head. Now onto the editing! I think the word you were searching for is ...

    Feb 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: August 2nd (or Looking North-West)

    This was beautiful! I really enjoyed the flow and word choice. The ending with what the thunder said to you was interesting. In a good way, don't worry. I must ...

    Feb 13, 2013


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