Hello!
This poem is so original! I love the way you presented it and of course the musicality of it. It's just great how you managed to combine together all the words starting with "p" in a way that makes the poem flow without seeming redundant.
Every word is on point and very well emphasized.
"I perch and ponder my presumed perplexing position, poring over each parcel of print I possess, each poem and paper and publication, in pursuit of any possibility, Of any way to end my plight."
Beautiful!
You perfectly captured the essence of writing and being a poet, and you presented it in a fun, playful way.
Thank you for sharing
Points: 930
Reviews: 28
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