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Hello charmyvora! I liked this poem very much. Especially because I am away from my family and I really miss them.. a lot.. and your poem made me think about ...

Hello Jcbutterrtoast. I really liked this poem because I could totally relate to it wholeheartedly. If I am understanding everything right, to summarize, is the poem generally about the person ...

Hello GoldFlame! I really liked this poem, because I am a huge fan of the Lord of the Rings. Also, I kinda like-ish Gollum too! This poem was very creative, ...

Hello KittyBee! To start off with, I real liked this poem, and 'I’ve even heard they can soothe over-used hearts.' just.. draws me in, I should say. I don't have ...

Hello Monsters! Okay, first, I should say that the poem was quite random, but intriguing. there was a snake twisting and digging its head into my lungs. I could feel ...

Hello Herbgirl! This poem was really interesting, and may I guess ; is this about a boy who is psychotic? Or, is this a boy who doesn't fit in? Either ...

Hello rothwise! I loved this haiku, to start with. I loved it especially because I knew what you meant so deeply, because I always think it too. 'If all of ...

Hello Camthelesbianpoet! This poem was very interesting. It could be interpreted in many ways, for such as, Then I myself lay down for the night, could be understood as going ...

Hello Lostthought! I liked this poem a lot. You did a GREAT job of contrasting but at the same time, finding the same in two entirely different substances. This poem ...

Hi ArianaSarroyo! I liked this poem white a lot. At first, when I was reading, I thought that it was going to be about suicide (which was stupid, meh), but ...

Hello Defyingravity, First, I should say that your poem is very interesting and well written. You have good word choices, and the end was unexpected, I should say ; but ...

Hello SecreteJournalist! Wow, this poem is very interesting, I should say. I never saw anyone feature a light bulb, the sign of brightness and hope into a depression. Did the ...

Hello Heclgehog! You really did reflect the modern education very well, although it sounds a little to harsh... In my opinion, today's education has improved and has grown more.. accepting. ...

Hi, Ravaien! Hmm. First of all, I should say, it is a little short. Maybe, you could add some more words? Is coral fragrance wrapped This part doesn't make sense, ...

Hi, Mayyda! First, I have to say, this poem is amazing. You wrote out the word 'friendship' into a beautiful poem. You began it well, and ended it well ; ...