mellophone7

I really love this. It's one of those poems where you just get such a strong, clear image in your head. The only thing I would comment on would be ...

I kind of liked this, but one thing about it is that you could either leave it this short, and it'd be okay, or you could expand on it, and ...

I kinda liked this. Me, being a painter, I clicked on it, and I wasn't disappointed with what I found. I really love poems that effortlessly rhyme, so thumbs up ...

I liked this, mainly because a lot of people seem (to me) to think that writing poetry "isn't cool" and it TOTALLY is!!! The meaning behind it was really clear. ...

Cute. I do like this. I agree with you when you say the third stanza is off a bit, but I'm sorry, I have no suggestions for you. Just one ...

Oh, I love this! It's always so cool and fascinating when somebody is able to take something (like fire) and describe it perfectly. I especially like it when people can ...

You were right. This was slightly confusing to read, but almost liked it, because that's how life is sometimes. I didn't find anything grammatically wrong with it, although I would ...

Wow, this is really, really good. I love the whole childhood happiness feel of it. Especially for being your first poem, this is very well written. I just have a ...

This is really good! This is my favorite part. And, why are the senses trusted so when all they do is deceive? Because all they know cannot be defined. Mainly ...

This is actually pretty good. Although, one thing I would suggest on changing would be the title. When I first clicked on it, I thought it was going to be ...

Short and sweet. Absolutely loved this. Sometimes the simplest poems are the ones that turn out to be the best, and this is one of them. Just one suggestions: add ...

Well, this poem most definitely made me never want to abuse a toy again! Talking about monsters eating a bear from the inside, and the bear's heart being already gone....really ...

This is really cool. It's kind of like you're combining dreams and some sort of fairy tale. In fact, this poem reminded me of a book I read, called The ...

Hi! I really liked this piece. It's lovely tying in a person's life and a leaf's life. Flawless. I glanced through the previous reviews and saw people had already helped ...

We all wish we could go back in time and become a kid again. Me included. Unfortunately, we can't, and have to settle for the memories. I loved reading this ...