mcleo1

Hi there! Mcleo1 here to review your work :) Well I'm going to first off say what caught me off guard in the first part of this. "Now y'all must ...

This is a very short poem so this'll be a relatively short review lol. Well first off, I've got to say I love Artemis and I haven't seen a poem ...

Hi ya! This is Mcleo1 here. Gonna make a short review. Well this poem is really really sweet. I really like it. It's like a nostalgia for school crushes :) ...

Well first, there is this grammar mistake "I,too, reached there" They should have spaces between them laugh out loud. Probably just a typo though. There some other grammar mistakes to, ...

Well this is a relatively short piece, and I mean a very short piece. So my review will be to the point and also short. Well, the title, I have ...

Once again, Hi! This one i promise I won't have as much critism as my past ones. Well again first off, the commas. It's killing me lol. But overall I ...

Oh wow, Hi again yams! I know my first review for you was a little heavy on reading but I promise to do less this time :). Well first off, ...

Hey there! :D Well first off, the first two stanza's, I swear they remind me of steam punk or a sci-fi Frankenstein

Hey there, first off, this was a really good poem. It just felt so heartfelt and so beautiful. I'm not the religious type, but this was interesting. There was a ...

Well first off, this is really nice. Well just in my opinion. It's quite ferocious and vicious. I don't know why you emphasized what you did, but it was tasteful. ...

This was.. wow not what I was expecting. Overall, it's an interesting concept. I'm not sure what you were going for here, but I'm assuming it has to do with ...

I've got to say, this had quite the twist and the turn. It was quite humorous and I've got t say I really really like that dark sense of humor. ...

Awesome, I really like it. The way you styled it was pretty interesting. I haven't seen a poem styled like this before. The rhyming was spot on. This is a ...

Well for one, I applaud you, I could never do anything with rhyming. I am more a free verse poet myself. But this is a sad poem as you said ...

This is a very interesting poem. The title is interesting in itself and I was not expecting this. I'm guessing you were using latin which I very much liked even ...