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Hello @herbgirl, Oooh, I loved this. It felt so moody, and dark, and absorbing. Do you write anything terrible?! I'm beginning to sound like a broken record when reviewing your ...

Hello @Lumi, This was powerful. There was a mystery and a dark, brooding intrigue to this piece. I loved it immediately. In my mind, I read this as a somber ...

Hello @kamsgirl3715, I confess myself speechless: reading this took my breath away. You articulate pain with this monologue in a way that was irresistible to me. This is an unusual ...

This is gorgeous, Rose. :) You have a gift for painting pictures for an audience. It actually kind of depressed me a little, as where I live, we are still ...

Hello @XxPheonixKittenxX, I could really relate to this piece. Some people have a deep fear of things like the dark, or fire, but I was always afraid of loss. So ...

Hey @AshleyDashley, This was immediately impactful. You send a deep and much needed message. This was so full of truth. "I'm too fat," she says, So she starts starving herself. ...

Hello, Ooooooohh, @restlessheart14. This was so beautiful to read. You don't see language like this often these days, and that you had the courage to go there was admirable. You ...

Hello, This spoke to me @herbgirl. I am only too familiar with this sort of pain. Rhythmically, this was solid, and a numbing, and perfect. I love the statement: "holding ...

Oh, how this spoke to me @deeproses. My heart is in tandem rhythm with this piece. I think maybe we all have been here, and we forget about the lost ...

Hi JeffRWoodridge, I was drawn into this poem immediately, and thoroughly enjoyed reading it! I struggled with the idea of being a writer while I was growing up; the act ...

Hi Mage! Sorry this review took so long. I printed it out, so I could take it with me as I traveled, and then left the notes I had taken ...

Hello Empires, This poem is powerful. I could really fathom the speakers pain. You have done such a nice job of capturing that suffering following a parting of ways. The ...

Hello SnazzyPencil, First off, cute username. :) I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. It flowed seamlessly, and introduced me to your character as a writer perfectly. Your use of lower ...

Hello DivergentDemigod, Firstly, I wanted to point out that the description of your poem ("This one is for my ex-bestfriend...") did a nice job pulling me in to read your ...