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Re: Lotus flower
Hello! I thought this was wonderful! definitely an enjoyable read! I love the flow and rhythm of it over all. Also, I the attention to detail in the process of ...
Nov 22, 2018 -
Re: Me
Hello! This is an amazing poem! I definitely enjoyed reading it! One of my favorite things about it is the fact that its personable and relate able. Even though there ...
Nov 22, 2018 -
Re: Our Flags
Hello! I loved this poem! It was a definite joy to read! I love that it rhymes and flows so easily through out the entire piece! Now to the nitty ...
Nov 22, 2018 -
Re: The Labyrinth
Hello! this poem was a very interesting read! I like the slight rhyming and the rhythm is decent. Over all, I'd say its pretty good. Now down to the actual ...
Nov 21, 2018 -
Re: shadows
Wow! This was an absolutely amazing read! It's extremely poetic and I can tell that you gave careful attention to your word choice as well. Your poem flows well; although, ...
Nov 20, 2018 -
Re: Hope. (first draft)
Very nice! This piece is very expressive and I love that you decided to create poem about a relevant topic and not just something random! Personally I thing that just ...
Nov 3, 2018 -
Re: The Gift of a Giver
Hello! Great poem for sure! I can feel lots of emotion behind it. The rhyme scheme/rhythm is really nice too. It definitely adds to the fluency of the piece. I ...
Oct 5, 2018 -
Re: The Last Chapter Of Us
Hello! This was a great poem! Truly wonderful for sure! Also, I actually just went through a very very similer thing about two weeks ago so I understand that feeling. ...
Sep 6, 2018 -
Re: Deleted 91
Hello! For starters Wow, just wow. This was truly amazing to read! I personally feel this way every day honestly and wow was this relate able. Thanks for sharing this! ...
Sep 6, 2018 -
Re: Truths
Hello! This was a great read! It was very interesting and relatable. To me at least I think this really represents how crazy life is. but also it shows that ...
Sep 4, 2018 -
Re: The Kitchen
Hello! This was a very good read! It was well written and easy to understand. A few things that could be helped would be the way you split your sentences. ...
Aug 31, 2018 -
Re: Silent Me
Hello! This was a very enjoyable read! It was extremely interesting and overall a good story. I liked the way you phrased everything. It makes it seem as though it's ...
Aug 31, 2018 -
Re: The Dog and The Soldiers.
Wow! That was an amazing story! By far one of my favorit things ive read on this sight so far. It was definitely worth the time it took to read ...
Aug 30, 2018 -
Re: Seeking out peace (Cobra x Reader) Fairytail
Hello! Over all I very much liked this story. It was kinda funny and I definitely enjoyed reading it. Also, everything was easy to follow and understand which helped make ...
Aug 30, 2018 -
Re: The Great Court Disaster Part I
This was great! By far it was one of the best short stories I've ever read! The comedy was absolutely comical! Surprisingly, I was able to relate to this because ...
Aug 27, 2018
