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Re: Infancy
Hey, Luke here for a review, as promised! Sorry it's taken so long, I've been busy and I wanted to make sure that the review I gave was of a ...
Oct 13, 2021 -
Re: Dark All Over; Walk in the Light
Hey, Luke here for a quick review! First of all, welcome to YWS! Its great to have more people joining us, especially poets (but thats just because I'm biased ahah). ...
Oct 7, 2021 -
Re: Hunger
Hey, Luke here for a quick review! So, first I'll go through what I liked, then some entirely personal suggestions for improvement, and then an overall summary at the end. ...
Oct 6, 2021 -
Re: February *
Hey, Luke here for a quick review, as requested, So, first things first, more slashes!!! Sorry, they make me excited, and I'm just really happy to see this as a ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: Chasm
Hey, Luke here for a quick review, as requested. First of all, wow. You're twice the poet I'll ever be, that's for sure. Your eloquence is extraordinary. This poem feels ...
Sep 22, 2021 -
Re: august burnout/ blocked september
Hey, Luke here for a quick review! So, I'm just gonna go through what I liked, then some of my own personal potential suggestions for improvement, and then summarise. First, ...
Sep 21, 2021 -
Re: The girl that sits on the rooftops
Hey, Luke here for a quick review! First of all, I want to say that if you need to talk, I'm here. We, as a community, are here. You may ...
Sep 18, 2021 -
Re: watch your own demise, slowly
Hey, Luke here for a quick review. I'm gonna dive right in with initial thought, then talk about things that I liked, some possible suggestions for improvement, and then a ...
Sep 18, 2021 -
Re: Raw Beats
Hey, Luke here for a quick review :) I absolutely love this poem. It's so simple, and yet its beauty is found in its simplicity. I think the particularly effective ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: Fallen Angel
Wow. I'm going to be honest, I'm not quite sure the meaning of this poem. I keep reading and re-reading and picking up on different things each time, but thats ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: Surrender or Rise?
First of all, welcome to YWS! It's great to have new members, especially poets (sorry I'm a little biased ahah). Into my review- poetry surrounding the expectations of others and ...
Sep 17, 2021 -
Re: What do you See?
Hey, Luke here for a short review! I really liked this piece. I’m a bit of a melt for this kind of conversational poetry, so when i saw I was ...
Jan 27, 2019 -
Re: Suffocating
Hey, Luke here for a review! I know you already have quite a few reviews on this, but I just felt I could maybe offer a fresh perspective. So, to ...
Jan 27, 2019 -
Re: i don't pray anymore
Hey, Luke here for a review, and also rally just my general thoughts on the topic of the poem as a whole. So, I think this is a really interesting ...
Jan 16, 2019 -
Re: Hello
Hey, Luke here for a review! Thanks for the follow, by the way. So, this was a nice enough poem. There were pretty words, and they were arranged into pretty ...
Jan 14, 2019
