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  • Poetry » Romantic, Horror Re: saint dwynwen

    Hey Rev, love this poem, and thanks for sharing the context behind it in the comments below, as to be honest I had never heard of St Dwynwen before about ...

    Aug 7
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Infancy

    Hey, Luke here for a review, as promised! Sorry it's taken so long, I've been busy and I wanted to make sure that the review I gave was of a ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dark All Over; Walk in the Light

    Hey, Luke here for a quick review! First of all, welcome to YWS! Its great to have more people joining us, especially poets (but thats just because I'm biased ahah). ...

    Oct 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Hunger

    Hey, Luke here for a quick review! So, first I'll go through what I liked, then some entirely personal suggestions for improvement, and then an overall summary at the end. ...

    Oct 6, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: February *

    Hey, Luke here for a quick review, as requested, So, first things first, more slashes!!! Sorry, they make me excited, and I'm just really happy to see this as a ...

    Sep 22, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Chasm

    Hey, Luke here for a quick review, as requested. First of all, wow. You're twice the poet I'll ever be, that's for sure. Your eloquence is extraordinary. This poem feels ...

    Sep 22, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: august burnout/ blocked september

    Hey, Luke here for a quick review! So, I'm just gonna go through what I liked, then some of my own personal potential suggestions for improvement, and then summarise. First, ...

    Sep 21, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health Re: The girl that sits on the rooftops

    Hey, Luke here for a quick review! First of all, I want to say that if you need to talk, I'm here. We, as a community, are here. You may ...

    Sep 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: watch your own demise, slowly

    Hey, Luke here for a quick review. I'm gonna dive right in with initial thought, then talk about things that I liked, some possible suggestions for improvement, and then a ...

    Sep 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Raw Beats

    Hey, Luke here for a quick review :) I absolutely love this poem. It's so simple, and yet its beauty is found in its simplicity. I think the particularly effective ...

    Sep 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Fallen Angel

    Wow. I'm going to be honest, I'm not quite sure the meaning of this poem. I keep reading and re-reading and picking up on different things each time, but thats ...

    Sep 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Surrender or Rise?

    First of all, welcome to YWS! It's great to have new members, especially poets (sorry I'm a little biased ahah). Into my review- poetry surrounding the expectations of others and ...

    Sep 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: What do you See?

    Hey, Luke here for a short review! I really liked this piece. I’m a bit of a melt for this kind of conversational poetry, so when i saw I was ...

    Jan 27, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Suffocating

    Hey, Luke here for a review! I know you already have quite a few reviews on this, but I just felt I could maybe offer a fresh perspective. So, to ...

    Jan 27, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i don't pray anymore

    Hey, Luke here for a review, and also rally just my general thoughts on the topic of the poem as a whole. So, I think this is a really interesting ...

    Jan 16, 2019


May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death.
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