lovelysayshi

Impressive. It is obvious that you put effort into this, and also a lot of emotion. I also really love your title! It is very creative. I really like how ...

This is pretty good, it kind of makes me curious as to what the actual story will be like. A few things are missing here and there. One thing you ...

HOLY SMOKES! You started off so wonderfully, it caught my attention immediately. The first two sentences are really impressive, this writing was absolutely fantastic. Not only did it seek my ...

Okay, so this is super cute; I really love the message. There is one thing that really bothers me though, in the second stanza after "But I had things to ...

This poem sounds like it could end up being an actual story other than a poem, that's just me though. Also, you could spread the poem out more by putting ...

This poem is somewhat confusing. At first it seems like you don't want the pink ribbons, this is emphasized because you said "there is a name, that I can't live ...

First off, thank you for using stanzas. I have seen so many poems without stanzas, it just relieves me to see one with them. Secondly, in the second stanza the ...

This poem was really well written, I enjoyed reading it is the least I could say. Anyway, what caught my attention was when you said "no nothing." I may be ...

Hello there, So a few little things that caught me here: 1. It's in bold...I know I am very picky, I am so sorry! haha. It kind of just messes ...

Okay, so here are a few things that concerned me: 1. It's not in a poetic form, poems have stanzas and lines, but most importantly stanzas. All I see is ...