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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Watching Sheep

    War is always a devastating thing. It brings out the worst in people, like trauma. I really like the background you gave this letter in your description. A nun that ...

    Dec 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Man at Station Four

    My interpretation of this poem is that either the man got hit by the train (or committed suicide), or that he got left behind as a kid by his parents. ...

    Dec 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: the snow queen with a heart of ice still wears a fur coat

    This poem was so beautifully made. What also made me read this is because, when I think I was younger I made up a story about an Ice princess who ...

    Dec 8, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: I don't want to be your friend.

    When I first read this poem, I thought you were talking about toxic friends. But as I got closer to the end of the poem, I realized that you're talking ...

    Dec 4, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Humor Re: She’s here

    I just couldn't stop laughing at this story, especially at the last line. This was just too funny. Even though I think it's supposed to be horror, its low-key kind ...

    Dec 3, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Flower Unnoticed

    I really liked this poem. You used a lot of rhymes which kind of felt like a song. I also read your short description for the poem. You talked about ...

    Dec 3, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Tired

    Before I get started on this review, let me give you some love hun: You are loved and cherished. I don't know why you would want to kill yourself, but ...

    Dec 2, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Writing is like a Disease

    I really like this poem/story. I'm sure others on YWS can relate to this, as well as other writers. When I have a story in my mind or a poem, ...

    Dec 2, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I tell myself I'm beautiful

    Hey, this is lovelydove. This is going to be a really long review, so bear with me. My mom always told me that I was beautiful. When I get a ...

    Dec 1, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mindscape

    I feel like this poem really described depression really well. We never want to go to that dark place in our mind. The isolation, the darkness, the everything. ''Again and ...

    Dec 1, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Trapped Over 13

    Another poem that left me wondering do I actually exist to the human eyes. ''Am I that forgettable? Doesn’t anyone notice me? Remember my name? See my face? Doesn’t anyone ...

    Nov 21, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: Jason shows Branwen the door

    Okay, correct me if I'm wrong, but is this a Jason the Toymaker, creepypasta fanfiction? I've always been a fan of Jason (Laughing jack is my soulmate, so suck up ...

    Nov 21, 2025
  • Short Story » Other, Teen Fiction Re: You…you don’t like me?

    This is a really great short story. Sometimes we can misinterpret things like Alessia and feel embarrassed. ''“Another moment? Together? Alessia, I…this has been nice, but I just want to ...

    Nov 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Praise of Nature

    When I say I needed this poem, I NEEDED IT. I'm more of an inside girly, since I hate being outside, around mosquitoes, bugs, stuff that makes you itchy and ...

    Nov 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: "I exist"

    I feel like we can all use this poem in our day to day lives. With so much chaos happening around us in the world, we sometimes need to take ...

    Nov 20, 2025


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