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Re: Crave
Despite how short and simple this poem is, it really has a lot of meaning behind it. ''To feel your touch To hear your voice To see your eyes As ...
Wed Dec 10, 2025 1:54 pm -
Re: Watching Sheep
War is always a devastating thing. It brings out the worst in people, like trauma. I really like the background you gave this letter in your description. A nun that ...
Wed Dec 10, 2025 1:49 pm -
Re: The Man at Station Four
My interpretation of this poem is that either the man got hit by the train (or committed suicide), or that he got left behind as a kid by his parents. ...
Wed Dec 10, 2025 2:03 am -
Re: the snow queen with a heart of ice still wears a fur coat
This poem was so beautifully made. What also made me read this is because, when I think I was younger I made up a story about an Ice princess who ...
Mon Dec 08, 2025 2:26 pm -
Re: I don't want to be your friend.
When I first read this poem, I thought you were talking about toxic friends. But as I got closer to the end of the poem, I realized that you're talking ...
Thu Dec 04, 2025 6:01 pm -
Re: She’s here
I just couldn't stop laughing at this story, especially at the last line. This was just too funny. Even though I think it's supposed to be horror, its low-key kind ...
Wed Dec 03, 2025 2:10 pm -
Re: Flower Unnoticed
I really liked this poem. You used a lot of rhymes which kind of felt like a song. I also read your short description for the poem. You talked about ...
Wed Dec 03, 2025 2:05 pm -
Re: Tired
Before I get started on this review, let me give you some love hun: You are loved and cherished. I don't know why you would want to kill yourself, but ...
Tue Dec 02, 2025 3:36 pm -
Re: Writing is like a Disease
I really like this poem/story. I'm sure others on YWS can relate to this, as well as other writers. When I have a story in my mind or a poem, ...
Tue Dec 02, 2025 3:03 pm -
Re: I tell myself I'm beautiful
Hey, this is lovelydove. This is going to be a really long review, so bear with me. My mom always told me that I was beautiful. When I get a ...
Mon Dec 01, 2025 3:37 pm -
Re: Mindscape
I feel like this poem really described depression really well. We never want to go to that dark place in our mind. The isolation, the darkness, the everything. ''Again and ...
Mon Dec 01, 2025 3:28 pm -
Re: Trapped Over 13
Another poem that left me wondering do I actually exist to the human eyes. ''Am I that forgettable? Doesn’t anyone notice me? Remember my name? See my face? Doesn’t anyone ...
Fri Nov 21, 2025 3:39 pm -
Re: Jason shows Branwen the door
Okay, correct me if I'm wrong, but is this a Jason the Toymaker, creepypasta fanfiction? I've always been a fan of Jason (Laughing jack is my soulmate, so suck up ...
Fri Nov 21, 2025 3:27 pm -
Re: You…you don’t like me?
This is a really great short story. Sometimes we can misinterpret things like Alessia and feel embarrassed. ''“Another moment? Together? Alessia, I…this has been nice, but I just want to ...
Fri Nov 21, 2025 3:19 pm -
Re: The Praise of Nature
When I say I needed this poem, I NEEDED IT. I'm more of an inside girly, since I hate being outside, around mosquitoes, bugs, stuff that makes you itchy and ...
Fri Nov 21, 2025 3:14 pm
