liveandbreathewords

No problem! If you ever need somebody to look over something for you, I'd be happy to help!!

You're absolutely welcome! :)

Thank you!! The lack of capitalization was instrumental in this poem because I was so upset that I just kept typing; I just wrote the whole thing all the way ...

Thank you very much! And about the stanzas-- I had had it broken up into four lines per stanza, but the site wouldn't allow me, for some reason, to copy ...

This was absolutely, incredibly beautiful and also terrifyingly sad. You're an amazing writer, and you should keep writing!!

This was really cute! Though, I think that when you said "An olive oil, to make you glimmer" you meant "And," but that's really all I could see for now... ...

Hold on I read it again and I think that you almost jump into the next scene; you should use more transitions to make it run more smoothly. I know ...

Wow. That was incredible. I don't even think I can find anything to correct; this was so beautiful and your writing is amazing. I can't wait to read more!

Well then I can't wait to read more :)

Well, actually, it's only Naomi that uses the Maleficent joke; the first is her thinking about it, the next her voicing the joke. I guess I should clear that up, ...

Thanks so much for your long review--it helped a lot!

This was so cute! I originally thought it'd be a bit...weird, but after reading the description I decided it was worth a shot, and I'm so glad I gave it ...

Thank you very much! And in the previous chapter they made plans to hang out, seeing as Carter is the only friend Naomi has at the moment. And the sentence ...

Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!

Thank you so much! I love getting nice long reviews! But, Carter is actually a supporting character, and Naomi is the main character. I like trying to write in both ...