Hello, I'm quite new and definitely not a professional at writing reviews but this short story intrigued me so much that I felt like I simply needed to discuss it.
Each sentence seems to carry a lot of raw emotion which, as a reader, really helped me understand the themes and ideas used. The surprising ending was very satisfying since it wrapped up everything smoothly and it added context to the metaphors in the beginning. Also the vocabulary used here is quite frankly amazing, just by glancing at the writing you can tell that the author is a well-read person
The only actual con I can think of about this story is that it could have perhaps had a bit more explanations as to why she is feeling the way she was feeling. Though the last paragraph gives some clues, no matter how many times I re-read it I can't really know for sure if it's the other character that makes the main character have these emotions or if she just feels bad for loving him while she is in a bad state of mind.
Overall, I think that this is a fantastic piece of literature!
Points: 236
Reviews: 4
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