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I would like to start off by saying THIS POEM ROCKS!!!!!! I love your play off of Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven". Personally, that is my all time favorite poem. ...

You did a great job with this poem. I think this does a great job of expressing emotion. I love the idea of the rhyme scheme, but I think it ...

I have no real criticism for this poem. The only thing I could suggest is for you to read it over again. Many times when reading it over you catch ...

This is a wonderful poem, and I love the story it tells. It was really adorable and funny, and I love the twist at the end. Honestly, I could only ...

First of all, I want to say I love this poem. I think it is great how you don't actually tell who the Children of the Night are, and just ...

I really love this poem, and thought that it has a great message behind it! It seems like you were very thoughtful while writing this, and I could tell that ...

I think that this was a really powerful poem. I loved the repeated line "I want to scream, I want to be free, let me be me." and I love ...

I like how you left this really open ended. I was wondering if you were planning on adding to it, since it says to read on at the end. One ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. At first, I though that it was a little strange, but during the last two stanza's, I think you really provoked an emotion. When ...

I LOVED this poem. I like how you kind of wrote it in more of a letter form than a poem, but it still flows nicely. Also, I can relate ...

I think that this is a really powerful poem, and enjoy the multiple meanings in it. The last line was amazingly phrased and I think it really leaves you thinking. ...

I really loved this poem. I think that the rhyming is wonderful and love how you talk about Gaia. I wasn't sure, but I thought that Gaia was spelt a ...

I really like this poem. It has a nice flow and it sounds nice. I am confused as to the meaning of it. In the beginning it sounds like someone ...

I thought that this was a very deep, meaningful poem, and you definitely achieved your goal! The one thing that I would change is the line about the collar bone. ...

I really liked this poem! You used great description and it was very easy to read and to follow. I agree with IamHathor22 that it was a great analogy. And ...