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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Just Because

    hi there! this is my first time reviewing in years so don't mind if i'm a little rusty. the repetition in this poem is what really drives the point home, ...

    Oct 1, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: A collection

    hello there! thanks for requesting a review. i’m really excited to review this, and i hope this is helpful for future writings! ok, let’s get started... Sleepy town, MD - ...

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Supernatural Re: Holy Heresy and Where Is Heaven?

    hello there! lillianna here to leave a little review. i hope you find this helpful and insightful for future writing. alright, lets jump right into it... poem one: i love ...

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Shipwreck

    hello hello Liminality! good morning, good evening, or whatever applies to you right now. i’m here to review your poem today, and i hope this will be helpful to you ...

    Jan 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Cusp of Insanity

    hello hello! good morning, afternoon, or whatever applies to you. i’m lillianna, and i’m here to leave a little review on your poem here, mordax! i hope this will be ...

    Jan 4, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Mirror

    hi anne! i’m lillianna, and i’m here to leave a quick but hopefully helpful review on your poem here. alright, let’s get straight into the review... starting with the first ...

    Dec 31, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: My Ailing Friend

    hello hello! i’m lillianna, and i’m here to review your work anne! i hope this is helpful for you. let’s start off with the first stanza: first off, the flow ...

    Dec 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Dear life,

    hello hello! i’m lillianna, and i’m here to review your poem today! i hope this will be helpful for you :) ok let’s start with the first stanza: this might ...

    Dec 16, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Co-rumination

    hi there! i’m here upon request from my thread. i almost forgot about doing a review today, so luckily i looked at the request thread. let’s jump in, and i ...

    Dec 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: ;-;

    hiiiiii i’m finally here to do a review. i hope this is helpful i’m not super experienced in this area ;-;. and omg there’s so much. ok let’s go: starting ...

    Dec 4, 2020
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Stretch My Wings

    hello there Vulcanite! i’m here to leave a review, that hopefully is helpful. i’ve never reviewed lyrics before, so i hope this goes well. i’m guessing that lines 1-7 count ...

    Dec 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Out of this World <3

    hi majesty!!! lulon is here to give a helpful(hopefully) review. here’s to my first review of the month(i’m doing team tortoise)! first off, let me just say this is beautiful ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Frittering away

    hey hkumar! lulon is here to review, upon your request. thanks for asking, by the way! anyways, let’s jump into this poem you have here. first, lets take a quick ...

    Jul 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Drowning in Torment (A poorly written sonnet)

    hey there! lulon is here to review upon request! starting out with some positive stuff: first, i don’t think it’s poorly written! it’s got some great descriptions, bringing the reader ...

    Jun 30, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: go home

    hey there! sorry for commenting twice, but while i was listening to it i just had say something. i’m harper, and i’m here to review these absolutely stunning song by ...

    Jun 8, 2020


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