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Re: Just Because
hi there! this is my first time reviewing in years so don't mind if i'm a little rusty. the repetition in this poem is what really drives the point home, ...
Oct 1, 2025 -
Re: A collection
hello there! thanks for requesting a review. i’m really excited to review this, and i hope this is helpful for future writings! ok, let’s get started... Sleepy town, MD - ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: Holy Heresy and Where Is Heaven?
hello there! lillianna here to leave a little review. i hope you find this helpful and insightful for future writing. alright, lets jump right into it... poem one: i love ...
Feb 3, 2021 -
Re: Shipwreck
hello hello Liminality! good morning, good evening, or whatever applies to you right now. i’m here to review your poem today, and i hope this will be helpful to you ...
Jan 5, 2021 -
Re: Cusp of Insanity
hello hello! good morning, afternoon, or whatever applies to you. i’m lillianna, and i’m here to leave a little review on your poem here, mordax! i hope this will be ...
Jan 4, 2021 -
Re: Mirror
hi anne! i’m lillianna, and i’m here to leave a quick but hopefully helpful review on your poem here. alright, let’s get straight into the review... starting with the first ...
Dec 31, 2020 -
Re: My Ailing Friend
hello hello! i’m lillianna, and i’m here to review your work anne! i hope this is helpful for you. let’s start off with the first stanza: first off, the flow ...
Dec 19, 2020 -
Re: Dear life,
hello hello! i’m lillianna, and i’m here to review your poem today! i hope this will be helpful for you :) ok let’s start with the first stanza: this might ...
Dec 16, 2020 -
Re: Co-rumination
hi there! i’m here upon request from my thread. i almost forgot about doing a review today, so luckily i looked at the request thread. let’s jump in, and i ...
Dec 4, 2020 -
Re: ;-;
hiiiiii i’m finally here to do a review. i hope this is helpful i’m not super experienced in this area ;-;. and omg there’s so much. ok let’s go: starting ...
Dec 4, 2020 -
Re: Stretch My Wings
hello there Vulcanite! i’m here to leave a review, that hopefully is helpful. i’ve never reviewed lyrics before, so i hope this goes well. i’m guessing that lines 1-7 count ...
Dec 2, 2020 -
Re: Out of this World <3
hi majesty!!! lulon is here to give a helpful(hopefully) review. here’s to my first review of the month(i’m doing team tortoise)! first off, let me just say this is beautiful ...
Dec 1, 2020 -
Re: Frittering away
hey hkumar! lulon is here to review, upon your request. thanks for asking, by the way! anyways, let’s jump into this poem you have here. first, lets take a quick ...
Jul 1, 2020 -
Re: Drowning in Torment (A poorly written sonnet)
hey there! lulon is here to review upon request! starting out with some positive stuff: first, i don’t think it’s poorly written! it’s got some great descriptions, bringing the reader ...
Jun 30, 2020 -
Re: go home
hey there! sorry for commenting twice, but while i was listening to it i just had say something. i’m harper, and i’m here to review these absolutely stunning song by ...
Jun 8, 2020
