lexy

The title reminded me of a racing horse, hee hee. Anyway, autumn yeah nice topic :-) I liked your use of "marshmallow" it struck up nice images for me. The ...

I wrote this when I was moody. Please tell me what you think of it. Roses scream The grass raided Blood gleams On its moist blades The silken flower Turns ...

I'll sit prune-faced in a courtyard, the eastern tract, thumbing the armrest of a bench, a shadow shepherding dawn down a western wall, legs crossed, agitating airs with studious kicks. ...

I used to think the only way that time flew was [s]to[/s] by throw(ing) my alarm (clock) out (of) the window. On those cold and bitter nights I wake to ...

I love the water melon bit, its a powerful bit of imagery (dripping off your tongue.) I suppose its the colours that made it real for me. Over all I ...

i agree with the above. To be honest it was the first lines of each stanza that made it clumsy and even boring.... sorry, i don't think its "deep" or ...

and people say that some of my work has creeped them out. I like it and it has powerful imagery :D good job!!! the crack in the pavement stuff is ...

actually.... I rather liked it. Maybe people that haven't been in that situation can't relate to the feelings portrayed or whatever.... I dunno do I ... but. I liked it. ...

The jigsaw pieces blaze through his permeable eyes, pierced with glass[s]y[/s] soul-stars shoving their way through in bloody tears. He begs me to disentangle his hopes and dreams which come ...

Inside I know she’s bleeding Her bubbliness is just an act I wish I knew how to help her How to save her life from death (I like the alliteration ...

*hyperventilating* This is a flipping good piece of work.... if I could write like this... well, you know! Ok my favourite bit was when you said "because we're poets" it ...

When you left a link in my blog after I had had a ranting session about him this really cheered me up :-) Its really captured him... lol. And my ...

Robin The quiet countryside of Mersham Where I watched the birds sing sweetly And the magpies sleep soundly. I hop from left to right searching for my friends, But I ...

In us there are only two hands, a suspension bridge over the Atlantic, (I love this part!!!!!) Undulating over the waves gently… Being caressed by the sunlight with froth and ...

This is for Rob Two hearts, One Love Two hearts become one Two souls entwine Two lives unite In love we are strong We'll live to see another day We'll ...