the earth takes root
the trees fall
as mankind follows suit
the end of all
That's a very suitable, decent ending for a poem like this. However, I found a few flaws. One thing, you should probably add commas. It was hard keeping up in some areas and I was like "whoa, whoa, whoa" what's that supposed to mean?I think the lack of comma usage in this poem is really what the threw off what could have been an excellent poem.
Also, I see how you were trying to make it rhyme, but in so many places it sounded like it was forced and you couldn't think of anything else to say. Perhaps, you should re-write it--getting rid of the rhyming all the way.
I think you should also get rid at least half of the images. There was so many, I didn't even have the time to focus on one long enough to really imagine it.