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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Definition of Freedom

    I love poems about freedom, and this is one of the best ones. I love these lines: Freedom is a pearl white shark, swimming depp into the great blue, using ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Blue Eyes

    I love this, it made me wish I had blue eyes. Its the way you describe their capturing essence, I think. Anyway I love these lines: You feed me- cerulean ...

    Mar 23, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: The Life Of A Writer

    I loved this script I would like to see it as a short comedy show that comes on when commercials are supposed to. It would be that good. I love ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Human's Treasure

    I like this, really I think that you should enter this in a contest one day. I love these lines: Let humans' mind wander to what they think fits the ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Running With Music

    I really like this, did you just make it up in your head? I think that this could be a good song. My favorite lines are. Encaptured by the movement, ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence

    I like this, and for a poem lacking big words it portrays a strong feeling of emotion that captures the life of a teenage girl. The lines I really like ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stormbringer - 1

    I really like this review. Good job, Ranger Hawk. This has the potential to be a good book, but this part sort of threw me off: Which Tower? There’s more ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Vow of Silence

    I really love, and really like this poem. It is very deep to me, and I really think that it would be useful as, maybe, getting published in a book ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Prophesy of promise

    I really like this, and I think that you had good use for it. Good job this is my favorite line: Friendship and Love, Promise the Dove, I Sing. Good ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Kisses Under Peach Trees

    I really like this poem, good job on writing it in english and in Spanish even thought I couldn't read it. I like the way you did your stanzas and ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Help

    I really like this poem, it is really good. Well, it is lyric poetry, but really good lyric poetry. You did a really good job shaping this poem. Do you ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An Odyssey

    I really like this, but like paperbackheart said I have no clue what you are talking about. But it doesn't mean that I don't feel that there is a deeper ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Craving for Books

    I like this poem. it describes what I go through basically every day, really. And I think that maybe you had either you had deep experience or something in this ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: I Believe... Do You?

    I like this, it is good. And half of the stuff on there, or the majority, I believe in, too. I think about some of those things constantly and this ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rooted in Defiance

    I really like this poem, it is really good. And I can tell that it is about women not aloud to be equal to men. And also I really like ...

    Mar 19, 2011


No one achieves anything alone.
— Leslie Knope