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Hey PenandSword,  I love the title of your poem, very attractive.  You have put in rhymes which adds to the smooth flow of the poem. 'I think I can change ...

Hey Leah ;) This is a very cute poem, not very difficult to interpret and the usage of simple language makes it easy for the readers. I like the way ...

Hey Nightwolf :) You know what? I just read an amaaazing poem here. It is beautiful :') The way you portrayed the dark evil nature of death is brilliant. The ...

Hey CFG :) To be honest, when I saw your title, I was like 'eww' ..hahaaa. Sorry :P But I like the concept. The bubbles shows the sensitivity the poem ...

I love the title :) It is a well written poem. Very smooth and the rhythm it follows is nice. I have a few opinions though. 1. Did you miss ...

Hey kanome :) Congratulations! An amaaazing poem. It is full of meaning. The dullness in the poem portays the sadeness and loneliness beautifully. The feeling of being trapped, ahh, I ...

Hey Wulie! Wow this ia beautiful. Well written! I could feeling the pain and the emptiness when you can see death almost. The loss, the pain, the love- I understand. ...

Hello Clarity :) Well, its short and sweet. It must be really difficult to write poems which are short and contain meaning. I am a little confused and yes, I ...

Wow Rachel :') It gives me a feeling of seeing a movie or reading a book, complete. Its like you narrated a story which ofcourse got me emotionally bound. I ...

Beautiful :') I can feel the pain of the person. The emotions got along well and yes, you feel connected to this poem, which is incredible. The feeling of being ...

I almost sung that. Wow! Very smooth and nice. But somehow ' grasping TO translucent bliss' doesn't sound right to me. The rhymes you have created is beautiful. And I ...

Hey Gummy :) A palindrome always has a wow factor according to me and after reading it, I am left amazed. This is definitely a well written palindrome and I ...

A wonderful and attractive title! I like poems like this, short and sweet but filled with meanings. The words 'shell of emerald' is beautiful, it brings in alot of creativity ...

Hello Dk :) This poem definitely creates a nice mood and yes, it is smooth. I am a little confused with meanings though. The line 'and its wave crosses to ...

Wooow Gigi :) Such a powerful poem full of meanings! I love the last line, the punch it gives to the poem is awesome. Very professional. The words are just ...