Hey Wulie!
Wow this ia beautiful. Well written!
I could feeling the pain and the emptiness when you can see death almost.
The loss, the pain, the love- I understand.
I loved the second stanza and the line ' inside I died a million times for you'..the essence of sacrifice is catchy.
However I am a little disappointed with you for putting your title in brackets [ ].
I hope you will continue writing more of this kind.
All the best!
Keep writing.
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