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Re: It Drips From My Tongue
Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. first off, i'm not a fan of gore, but only in horror stories and manga. however, this was very well-written ...
Jan 7, 2017 -
Re: Snow Angel
Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review. Words cannot express what i feel. so, i put it in a song: Sleigh bells ring! Are you listening! In the lane, ...
Jan 4, 2017 -
Re: Lollipop of a Soul
hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. first off, this was pretty good. the poem was written with good detail that it was just like being inside candy. it ...
Jan 2, 2017 -
Re: Winged Hope
Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review. So far, this was a pretty good poem. the way it was written seems to symbolize the depressing, cynical atmosphere reflecting our ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: 10 pm
Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. First off, the poem started off very cryptic with a lot of philosophical themes of dreams. Then it shifts to ...
Dec 24, 2016 -
Re: like steppingstones.
Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. This poem speaks to me. it talks to all of us of the existential viewpoint of the human existence, and how when ...
Dec 23, 2016 -
Re: Joyride
Hi. this is kman134. I'm here to review your work. This is a really good poem. it's built up really well. At first, the first stanzas were pretty dull, but ...
Dec 23, 2016 -
Re: Ocean
Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. First off, this is pretty good. the emotional and symbolic representation of the ocean was brilliantly pieced together. "i am drowning in ...
Dec 23, 2016 -
Re: Good night.
Hi, this is kman134. i'm here to review. this is a pretty good poem. it's like an ominous christmas poem. "The night has come and seized the sky." this was ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: Coffins
Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review. This was a decent poem. depressing, but decent. it reflects on how pointless life cane, giving it the nihilistic message of time. ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: how was your day?
Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review your work. "I told everyone to 'Fuck off' today because i was feeling vulnerable." I can understand this. anyone insecure would lash ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: Imagine
hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. first off, this poem was very nihilistic and absurd. It's mentioning of a world of hopelessness and sadness emphasizes that. which is ...
Dec 19, 2016 -
Re: Luke
Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review. First of all, i am not a fan of the Riordan book series. However, this was a pretty good fanfic poem. the ...
Dec 19, 2016 -
Re: i die on paper
hi. my name is kman134. i'm here to review. "I die on paper, the process is a flowing flood -" this reminds me of how i write. when writing, my ...
Dec 16, 2016 -
Re: Sound of a tortured soul
hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. First of all, i love this poem. As a fan of the macabre and the horror, i could say this was a ...
Dec 16, 2016
