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Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. Ralph Waldo Emerson once said, "Nature always wears the colors of the spirit." The third part was very descriptive the ...

Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. Ah. the never ending question of what's inside of our flesh. honestly, this poem was very morbid and disturbing, yet ...

Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. When i read it, i thought the title was befitting of the stanzas, even if it's from a My Chemical ...

Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review your work. this is pretty good. it's well-written and comical. however, this part seemed a little off with the poem: "In a ...

Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. The sun and the moon. two polar opposites that decide the fate of the world. one brings light while the ...

Hi. This is Kman134. I'm here to review your work. The story was very romantic and imaginative. the symbolisms and metaphors were well-constructed. the emotional feel made me feel like ...

Hi. This is kman134. I'm here to review your work. First off, this poem started off pretty well. the spacing was good and the grammar and wording was well-written. the ...

Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. the use of suicide and self-infliction was put together well. the feeling of pain varies from person to person, realistically ...

Hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. You referenced the lullaby "Twinkle Twinkle little star" and gave ti an existential twist to the lyrics. the way it ...

Hi. This is kman134. i'm here to review your work. This was a very romantic piece. the metaphors and the similes really influenced the humanism of the poem. "I'm not ...

Hi. this is kman134. i'm her to review your work. first off, this was very haunting and very descriptive. honestly, as an adamant believer in string theory, i can say ...

Hi. this is kman134. i'm here with a review. this was pretty good. it's short, yet very insightful. it points out an individual's future and it would make one happy, ...

Hi. this is kman134. here is my review. This was a well-written and simplistic poem. i really enjoyed it and the references to words with e and i in it. ...

hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review. first off, wow! this was really deep. this reminds of an Oscar Wilde love poem, or Dorian Gray. the emotional appeal was ...

hi. this is kman134. i'm here to review your work. This is pretty good. it's short, sweet, and down to the point. "i need time to catch my breath or ...