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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Growing Up

    Hey there, this is Kman134, here, with a review. Growing up is a hard thing. You start off optimistic and full of hope for the world. That is, until the ...

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Apperciation

    Hey there, this is Kman134 here to review. I can understand the need to be appreciated, even when writing it in poetry. I love the references of the Odyssey and ...

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: smoke & fevers

    Hey, this is Kman134, here, with a review. I like this poem you have presented. The symbolisms and metaphors are very well placed. there are a few grammatical and spelling ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Preface

    hey, this is kman134, here, with a review for you. I love the "Man vs. Machine" concept in the first paragraph. though people are not entirely aware of this, technology ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sloping Sidewalks

    Hello, this is Kman134, here, with a review for you. First off, i love the idea of staying in a dead end town, feeling like you're going nowhere in life. ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: bye bye daisies <3

    hey, this is kman134, here, with a review. First of all, it's not the best poem, but it is still good to read. The concept of life and death being ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Terms and Conditions

    This is a great poem because of how it relates to the real world. People tell not to be with some because they say he/she is "Trouble" or "Will break ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dungeons and Dragons

    Hello, this is kman134, here, to review. This is an impressive piece of work, even though it's written by an eleven-year-old. Oh the curse of a nerd; i feel your ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Greatest Quest I Ever Wanted

    hello, this is kman134, here, with a review. the poem seems to indicate two different contrasting views: An optimistic adventurous one throughout, and a cynical, yet hopeful, one in the ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Perhaps

    The theme of this is really sad. Seeing a loved one die is the most painful thing to experience. it was very beautiful and serene. the symbolisms are so emotional ...

    Mar 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer

    Hey, this is kman134, here, with a review for you. First of all, the story is a bit bland and isn't as emotional as other poems i've read. It's a ...

    Mar 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: Darkness - Poem/Short story

    Hello, this is Kman134 with a review for your work. Let's say that this poem was was very long and looked more like a short story. However, it was pretty ...

    Mar 20, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Eternal Time

    Hello, this is kman134 here to review. This was a very short fic. From reading it, i could see the reflection of the real world, dealing with family problems and ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You and Me and Infinity

    Hello, this is Kman134, here to review your poem. Now, i get what the message is; no one truly dies and that if you remember this person, then he will ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: I'm here too.

    Hello! this is Kman134 here to review your work! i looked at it and was surprised at how short it was. However, I was more surprised by how powerful the ...

    Feb 21, 2016


Half the work that is done in this world is to make things appear what they are not.
— Elias Root Beadle