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Re: Growing Up
Hey there, this is Kman134, here, with a review. Growing up is a hard thing. You start off optimistic and full of hope for the world. That is, until the ...
Jul 27, 2016 -
Re: Apperciation
Hey there, this is Kman134 here to review. I can understand the need to be appreciated, even when writing it in poetry. I love the references of the Odyssey and ...
Jul 27, 2016 -
Re: smoke & fevers
Hey, this is Kman134, here, with a review. I like this poem you have presented. The symbolisms and metaphors are very well placed. there are a few grammatical and spelling ...
Jul 26, 2016 -
Re: Preface
hey, this is kman134, here, with a review for you. I love the "Man vs. Machine" concept in the first paragraph. though people are not entirely aware of this, technology ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: Sloping Sidewalks
Hello, this is Kman134, here, with a review for you. First off, i love the idea of staying in a dead end town, feeling like you're going nowhere in life. ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: bye bye daisies <3
hey, this is kman134, here, with a review. First of all, it's not the best poem, but it is still good to read. The concept of life and death being ...
May 9, 2016 -
Re: Terms and Conditions
This is a great poem because of how it relates to the real world. People tell not to be with some because they say he/she is "Trouble" or "Will break ...
Mar 21, 2016 -
Re: Dungeons and Dragons
Hello, this is kman134, here, to review. This is an impressive piece of work, even though it's written by an eleven-year-old. Oh the curse of a nerd; i feel your ...
Mar 21, 2016 -
Re: The Greatest Quest I Ever Wanted
hello, this is kman134, here, with a review. the poem seems to indicate two different contrasting views: An optimistic adventurous one throughout, and a cynical, yet hopeful, one in the ...
Mar 21, 2016 -
Re: Perhaps
The theme of this is really sad. Seeing a loved one die is the most painful thing to experience. it was very beautiful and serene. the symbolisms are so emotional ...
Mar 20, 2016 -
Re: Summer
Hey, this is kman134, here, with a review for you. First of all, the story is a bit bland and isn't as emotional as other poems i've read. It's a ...
Mar 20, 2016 -
Re: Darkness - Poem/Short story
Hello, this is Kman134 with a review for your work. Let's say that this poem was was very long and looked more like a short story. However, it was pretty ...
Mar 20, 2016 -
Re: Eternal Time
Hello, this is kman134 here to review. This was a very short fic. From reading it, i could see the reflection of the real world, dealing with family problems and ...
Mar 5, 2016 -
Re: You and Me and Infinity
Hello, this is Kman134, here to review your poem. Now, i get what the message is; no one truly dies and that if you remember this person, then he will ...
Mar 5, 2016 -
Re: I'm here too.
Hello! this is Kman134 here to review your work! i looked at it and was surprised at how short it was. However, I was more surprised by how powerful the ...
Feb 21, 2016
