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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Growing Up

    Hey there, this is Kman134, here, with a review. Growing up is a hard thing. You start off optimistic and full of hope for the world. That is, until the ...

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Apperciation

    Hey there, this is Kman134 here to review. I can understand the need to be appreciated, even when writing it in poetry. I love the references of the Odyssey and ...

    Jul 27, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: smoke & fevers

    Hey, this is Kman134, here, with a review. I like this poem you have presented. The symbolisms and metaphors are very well placed. there are a few grammatical and spelling ...

    Jul 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Preface

    hey, this is kman134, here, with a review for you. I love the "Man vs. Machine" concept in the first paragraph. though people are not entirely aware of this, technology ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sloping Sidewalks

    Hello, this is Kman134, here, with a review for you. First off, i love the idea of staying in a dead end town, feeling like you're going nowhere in life. ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: bye bye daisies <3

    hey, this is kman134, here, with a review. First of all, it's not the best poem, but it is still good to read. The concept of life and death being ...

    May 9, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Terms and Conditions

    This is a great poem because of how it relates to the real world. People tell not to be with some because they say he/she is "Trouble" or "Will break ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dungeons and Dragons

    Hello, this is kman134, here, to review. This is an impressive piece of work, even though it's written by an eleven-year-old. Oh the curse of a nerd; i feel your ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Greatest Quest I Ever Wanted

    hello, this is kman134, here, with a review. the poem seems to indicate two different contrasting views: An optimistic adventurous one throughout, and a cynical, yet hopeful, one in the ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Perhaps

    The theme of this is really sad. Seeing a loved one die is the most painful thing to experience. it was very beautiful and serene. the symbolisms are so emotional ...

    Mar 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Summer

    Hey, this is kman134, here, with a review for you. First of all, the story is a bit bland and isn't as emotional as other poems i've read. It's a ...

    Mar 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Culture, Dramatic Re: Darkness - Poem/Short story

    Hello, this is Kman134 with a review for your work. Let's say that this poem was was very long and looked more like a short story. However, it was pretty ...

    Mar 20, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Eternal Time

    Hello, this is kman134 here to review. This was a very short fic. From reading it, i could see the reflection of the real world, dealing with family problems and ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You and Me and Infinity

    Hello, this is Kman134, here to review your poem. Now, i get what the message is; no one truly dies and that if you remember this person, then he will ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: I'm here too.

    Hello! this is Kman134 here to review your work! i looked at it and was surprised at how short it was. However, I was more surprised by how powerful the ...

    Feb 21, 2016


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X