klara1882

Like it very much. My favourite part: ''As if I'm alone In a room full of people, Everyone cares But no one understands. I just want to run away From ...

Hello, Here I am as requested. I won't be concentrating on grammar errors for I'm not that good at grammar myself. Throughout the story you didn't capitalize names, beginnings of ...

Hi, I won't make this long for I usually am not a huge fan of poetry. I have to say that I absolutely loved this. Great job. ~and you wonder ...

Hi, I'm Klara nice to meet you. :D I will review your piece today. First off, I'd like to say that I really felt like I could relate to Annie. ...

Yeah, I love this. ~I light myself a cigarette and begin to talk of our life together. The playground we used to share, the friends we grew to know but ...

Hi Luca, I'm going to review your poem today. I'm not that much of a poet, but I'll do my best. I'll try to be patient. XD First off, I'd ...

Hi Devan! I really like this. I don't know if this is a part of something bigger, but it seems like it is. It seems like it's a random description ...

Hello there! :) I really like this. I think it's a great introductory part to the story that could be amazing, I'm thinking about all of the things that might've ...

Hello I'm not really that much of a poet but I really loved this, especially these three lines: And she whispered shyly “yes” But, of course, he knew best. And ...

Beautiful writing style. I loved it. :)

Hello. I'm sure we all need answers to your wonders, because they're always the same. For everyone. However, not everything in life has to be the way most of people ...

Hi, I truly enjoyed this piece. It is very easy to read, and even though a bit of cliche, it's emotional. While reading I could feel Hal's sanity which made ...

Hi, I truly enjoy this way of writing - nothing but a dialogue. It kind of encourages readers to imagine the whole picture only by their imagination (which is always ...

Hi, I enjoyed reading this. It's beautiful, emotions are well shown in it. It's easy to feel all you felt when writing it. Keep writing, it's great.

Hi, I agree with most of it. ''What stopped me at fact number 10?! I don’t know the rest of them. By God’s will, a long life is still ahead ...