Published May 28, 2012
Sometimes I wonder, and I keep wondering about many things in this life, things that are kind of difficult to have the answer for,
To the world; Sometimes I wonder why do people lie? Can't they just tell the truth?!, why do people cheat?!, can't they be loyal?!
And I also wonder why does hate even exist?! can't we all live in love and peace?! can't we stop having wars and just have normal lives?!
I wonder why does everyone want to be a hero, but no one is ready to sacrifice?! I also wonder why is it hard for us to accept apologies?!
I also wonder why can't you all stop Criticize each other and accept things the way they are?!
To the love of my life; sometimes I wonder how my life would be without you?! I wonder if I didn't have you, what would take my mind in the lonely nights?
I wonder why can't I think of something without you being in it? And I wonder if the same happens to you?! I wonder if you know my past would you stay with me?
I wonder if you are going to be always with me?! I wonder if I'm on your mind?! because you never left mine. During the day, I wonder if you miss me? During the night, I wonder if you would be dreaming of me?
So does anyone have the answers to my wonders?
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Hello.
I'm sure we all need answers to your wonders, because they're always the same. For everyone.
However, not everything in life has to be the way most of people think it is. We are owners of our own lives and we get to choose to look on the bright or the dark side of everything that happens to us. For example criticism does not have to be a bad thing if we know how to accept it.
Review: I wouldn't use so many ?s and !s because they lose their true meaning when using it often. Maybe you should try to express their meaning (your anger, desire for answers) using words.
Also, I wouldn't end with the question for readers but with a short (2, 3 sentences) monologue in which you would express your feelings (confusion etc.) because in the end, it is noone who answeres your wonders but yourself.
Maybe it's only my style of writing, though.
Keep wondering, it is a key to a good writing!
heya, so Im gonna try blend an answer and a review in here!
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Review; I wouldnt put all the ?! in, only put them on the bigger more exasperating qustions to give more effect. I also wouldnt include the commas in your first line of wonderings
Answer; I think hate has to exist to highlight the good in the world, if there was no hate, how could there be any good?
Its hard to accept appologies because we were hurt, if you forgive, you can get hurt again
If we excepted things how they were, then you wouldnt be wondering( but Im glad you are!
I do like your list of wonderings though! givesone a lot to think about!
--Roxy
well, thank you Roxy
and after thinking so much about those things I wonder about I guess I found the answers for some of them. And for a person like me I just can't accept things the way they are, I have to change things into better.
-Spy
anytime!
Id be like you which is why I really enjoyed this piece as much as I did 
and I am glad that there are people who try change things for the better out there! 
But my mother used to tell me that am unique and there is no other person on this planet like me
:p
awe im sorry
Im sure your mother is right! 
she is always right
I knew it. you can be the female version of me if you want. 
sounds like a good plan!
This was really good! I just think maybe you didn't need to put all the "?!," 's in there..
thank you
and next time I won't.
I wonder about a lot of things to. And I guess the answer to the most part of your wonders would be:because we're human, and we're not perfect. And if all of the bad things in this world didn't exist, none of the good things would either.
I like your wonders, they're really deep, and sometimes I wonder similar things.
Keep writing!
wordsandwishes
Thank you