- Re: Hotel of the lost Jul 19, 2013
- Re: catch me while you can Jul 19, 2013
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Re: Someone Like You
Hi there :) I'll admit that I haven't read it all, but it's just because I don't have enough time to do that:) Okay, so I really like the idea ...
Jan 29, 2013 -
Re: RJ
Hey there I really like what this story is about and I consider it well written. I only have one suggestion - not to make it clear what this story ...
Dec 14, 2012 -
Re: November 23rd, 2012
Hey there I really like this - it's a simple and as Raelyn said, I think it has a lot of potential. It might be a great part of some ...
Dec 13, 2012 -
Re: Therefore I am Dead, Hypothetically.
Hey Puck Not much to say but still I have an urge to say something. I admit that I'm in love with all of your writing. Though I'm not quite ...
Dec 11, 2012 -
Re: Dear Future Daughter
Hey there I like ths. It might become much better if you work on it a little bit more, though. The first thing I don't like is that there is ...
Dec 10, 2012 -
Re: The Moon's Malevolence Chapter 1
Hello there, one thing you should keep in mind is that this looks like a 'box of text' and I'm pretty sure most of the people here are too lazy ...
Dec 10, 2012 -
Re: Chat Matt- Part 1
Hey there! So yeah, I guess this needs a lot of work but I really like the idea of what this might be if you work on it. I guess ...
Nov 19, 2012 -
Re: Obstacles...I didn't pass
Hey, my name is Klara and today I'm here to review your poem :) (There is no criticism so I guess I'm just commenting) First of all, let me tell ...
Nov 19, 2012 -
Re: A game of hide and seek...
Hey, I'm not really into poetry and I'm not sure if I'll be of any help but I'm here as requested :) First of all, I like the emotion of ...
Nov 14, 2012 -
Re: Weak
We can only write well about the things we are familiar with; things we love, we hate, we fight for, we fight with; things we enjoy talking about and things ...
Nov 14, 2012 -
Re: Weak
We can only write well about the things we are familiar with; things we love, we hate, we fight for, we fight with; things we enjoy talking about and things ...
Nov 14, 2012 -
Re: Out the hollows where the swallow nests
We can only write well about the things we are familiar with; things we love, we hate, we fight for, we fight with; things we enjoy talking about and things ...
Nov 14, 2012 -
Re: I can hold a grudge
Hello there, my name is Klara and I am here to review your piece today. My suggestions: -“But why, mom?” I had been begging my mom to let me stay ...
Nov 2, 2012