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This poem was very good, I liked the flow of rhyme. Overall there is not anything wrong with it that I can see. Keep writing! -M.

This poem was very confusing, try to write another word other than feel. Use synonyms in a thesaurus and try to rewrite it, it was a bit difficult to read ...

I enjoy reading all of your works but this one was my favorite. Though it did not have much imagery I liked the flow of it, it made me laugh ...

No, I wrote this by myself. (: I do not copy others, I think it is a bit trashy.

Yes, I am sorry for that aswell. I did not have much to work with when I spoke of Italy. I am planning a visit there next year.

thank you, I suppose the balloons part is confusing. Sorry for that, I merely men't people only look at the size of things.

Yes, well their is no children out at night. It was the grass on the ground that I was speaking of.

You have a very unique way of writing short poems, this one by far is my favorite that I have read from you. (: keep Writing. -M. H. Darling

I liked this poem, but I feel it was lacking something important. Try to make it longer maybe.

Well in saying the word 'democracy' and 'dictators' I mean't to say how goodbye is a word everyone is forced to say. I'll add that in so it can make ...

Nice poem, it makes me feel like I am speaking this. Because this is how I feel when my more worse emotions get the best of me. Keep writing. -M.H. ...

That a nickname everyone calls him, and I thought Jimmy rhymed with that part of the poem.

I really enjoyed reading this poem,this really expresses a lot of emotion, and it shows how I (the reader) feels about the world. Keep writing (: -M.

I corrected my mistakes. I suppose I did not re-read over everything, thanks to both of you! :D

No problem, now for the 'Where is my tent' I was referring to a circus, a ring master yelling and the pain of the two small children who are suppose ...