kingofeli

Wow, this story kept me reading from the first sentence right down to the very end! It's a well-written piece, though there are some discrepancies, they weren't huge. The first ...

The way that this poem was put together is absolute genius, and the title adds even more to it. I love the way you chose your vocabulary for this poem; ...

This is a very short poem, but it's able to convey a lot of feeling and background in a very short amount of time, which is what I like. It's ...

Ahh, this poem gives me some conflicting feelings between "scared" and "enlightened", which I really enjoy! On one hand, it feels almost scary, as you're talking about all of these ...

This poem is very nice. I enjoy the structure and the dedication (happy 10th birthday even though I'm late, YWS). The poem flows very nicely, and I also like the ...

Well, this poem definitely hits deep for me as well. I have the same problem with cutting and self-harming; my body is quite literally littered by scars from where I've ...

Alright well, there's a lot to be done here, but don't get discouraged! The first thing I'm going to recommend is paragraph breaks. A new paragraph should be started every ...

Oh wow where do I start with this? This is such an amazingly good poem, I honestly have no idea how it has six likes and no reviews so here ...

A truly heartfelt and kind of heartbreaking poem indeed! It made me sad reading it, but I'm guessing that was the intent, so that's a point for you. While I ...

Wow, no reviews on this yet? That's really surprising. Alright, here we go! I really enjoy the way that this poem was written. Each placement of punctuation and space of ...

This is a nice poem--it kind of scares me, which seems like that's the purpose of the poem. I do enjoy scary-sounding stuff though, and this poem has a very ...

Wow. This poem really hits me right in the heart--it's very personal and I can almost feel the disappointment and upset of the speaker/author. It also conveys feelings that I've ...

Hm. I think this really would have been better if it were longer--the short length of the poem doesn't really convey any sort of message. Forgive me but I think ...

This is a very, very good poem and I don't know why it has so few reviews. Thanks to the rhyme, I feel like the strength of the poem is ...

I really enjoy this poem and the style it was written in. It reminds me a lot of my own work, mostly with the lack of uppercase letters. I think ...