kingofeli

Well that was kind of...I wasn't expecting that to end that way 0.0 It was pretty freaking creepy, I'll give you that. The idea of cannibalism and torture to the ...

I really enjoy the way you wrote this poem. Acrostics are hard to write to begin with, as are poems that rhyme, but you managed to stick the two together ...

Now this is really great! And yet another amazing poem from you, my dear, though that wasn't anything that I wasn't expecting, considering that you've amazed me already. I could ...

Since you requested it, here I am to review your poems, starting with this one! I must say, you never cease to amaze and dazzle me with your poems. I ...

Heya, Ricky from the Black Knights review team, here to review your poem! This is a very good poem for your first entry, and I can tell that you put ...

Heya, Ricky here from the Black Knights, coming to review your poem! This poem has a great flow and beat, a strong rhyme scheme, and is very clear, all of ...

Heya, Ricky here from the Black Knights, here to review your poem! This poem caught my interest from the title and the use of the brackets. It's not often you ...

Well, Ricky here from the Black Knights, and I'm here to review your work! And boy, was this a powerful little piece! I almost wish that you had written more ...

Heya, Ricky from the Black Knights here to review your lovely poem! I think this is the first time I've ever reviewed for you, but this certainly isn't the first ...

Short, yet powerful, this is something I love in all of the poems I read. Your poems are quite outstanding, and this one is no exception. There's not much I ...

Have you abandoned this? If not, I'm here to help review. This is a good beginning to a poem and looks like it has a lot of potential, but because ...

While this story is very interesting and beautifully narrated, you do have some issues when it comes to grammar and punctuation. I noticed several places where periods should be; whenever ...

I really enjoyed this poem! I like the way that it flowed and I also enjoyed the way you repeated the statements "come and go", "break their pattern", etc. I ...

Oh wow. This poem really packs a personal punch, which is enhanced by the shortness and sweetness of the poem. You know how to use your words and your lines ...

Wow, this was unexpectedly depressing, but I really enjoyed it! I didn't see any spelling or grammar errors, which is always good, so there was nothing to distract me from ...