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I don't like it, I love it! This is really original and realization. I think that you really need to write more! Can't wait to read even more, Alicia.

snoopysoap wrote : this was nice. i liked it. you could probably put some paragraphs or something in there, instead of it being just one big block (though im not ...

Hey there and wow! This is great! I like the way you write it and I think you should write more. The way you write it makes the reader and ...

theotherone wrote : Hello there, I'm here as requested! I really liked this poem. The imagery was awesome, and the way you wrote it... Well, it's pretty good. ;) I ...

Wow! First of all, I don't even know what to say about it. It's cool and creepy. I write some poem and I only post when I feel like I ...

Hello and welcome to Young Writers Society! I enjoyed reading it. I like the intro but it's kind of disturbing when you keep on repeating it over and over again. ...

shanan-cat wrote: Oh, very unique! Although, very different.... I think that most people understand that when reading a poem, you count the syllables in your head. I thinks it's actually ...

Hello and welcome to the site! I hope you enjoy your stay! I like this part Put me down before I hurt someone. But I don't really understand what you ...

Hey there! I don't think this poem is too long. I liked this poem. There's a lot of "promise" in it. So, don't look behind that curtain, Don't pull back ...

Hello, forgive me if I come off me,this poem is a little too cliche to be deep but i like the last line "I wonder, if he loves me." Anyway, ...

Hello, I think this is okay. I liked it. AquaMarine wrote that it's not totally original but I liked the meaning of the lyrics. I founded myself singing it in ...

fading-dream wrote: You have captured what many authors fail at. The writing is not about capitalization and punctuation but about rhythm, feeling, flow. You have succeeded wonderfully. I love the ...

Flower~Child wrote :Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer. I hope you have been enjoying the site so far. Please don't take my review as harsh because ...

Sakuragirl1 wrote : That's really cool. We've been told our whole lives were going to use math, and you just showed that in a cool way. Keep Writing! I totally ...

retrodisco666 wrote :I don't care if other people see things wrong in this. I wish I could write that good, because that was amazing. I absolutely love it. I like ...