Published July 24, 2011
And there I imagine you, once again.
In that floral patterned dress, you stand there, with that aura of love lingering around you, gazing into my eyes with your yet too perfect self.
I love you, I love you, I love you. I will say it again, I love you with all my heart.
Your beauty and personality stuns me to where I can't move a single muscle.
We will never end, only continue. From the desert significance of Nevada, to the green, lush state of Washington.
I can't wait for the rest of my life with you. <3
Now, this short poem shall end here.
But remember, you are never to far away from my mind. <3
Love yours truly,
Anthony James...Forever yours. <3
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Thank you
I can tell it's obviously personal, but if you want my opinion I'm willing to give it.
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It's sweet and formal. I think you could have probably broken up some of the lines where there are commas. It just makes it look better and not look like such run-ons. I know they're not, but it's just how it looks and how it reads.
I think you could do more with it, or SAY more, but for what it was, it's a cute little love poem. Not bad.
Good job and good luck (with the writing and the girl
-Lindsay
I don't like it, I love it! This is really original and realization. I think that you really need to write more!
Can't wait to read even more,
Alicia.
Thank you
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh I love this
great imagery and realization of character and placement. I thought it was very original. The cuteness factor and the originality made it seem so sweet and heartfelt. Innocent. I thought it was a great idea! 
Keep up the good work
I'll do another one for you sometime this next week. Much longer. <3
Anthony, I love you. This is...wow. I'm in tears right now. x) God...Anyways, thank you. Hahaha. I'm glad I got you to read my story, otherwise you would have never posted that. Xxxxx.
P.S. This is your girlyfriend (as if you didn't already know that...)