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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Your Mouth Forms My Name

    Hey I'm Kenzie! Wow! I think this poem is really fascinating and I love the way you portrayed it to your audience. The imagery of the word "fell" falling down ...

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Girl Who Wrote Symphonies

    Hey! I'm Kenzie and I really liked this literature poem you wrote. I think that the topic of it is very fascinating and full of truths and emotion. It is ...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Do You Believe

    This is beautiful. I am Catholic and also believe. But as everyone is their own individual, I believe some parts and do not believe other parts. Or in other words ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Other » Health, Realistic Re: Sad teens with happy faces- intro

    This is very emotional work. There is much meaning behind it and even though it is dark, I like how there is hope. This is the kind of reading someone ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Sammy

    WOW! ^^ my first reaction to reading this I myself love mystery and supernatural type reads and this was amazing! I do not have any corrections or suggestions only compliments. ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Help Me Calm Down

    Hi there! Just wanted to leave some comments on your lyrics which i think are great! This would really make for a great song and the whole time i was ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: The who

    Hello! I am not here for any grammatical corrections or suggestions (sorry!) for I am no English Wiz myself, but to simply say this story is fascinated! How sweet for ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: American Citizen.

    This is amazing! Wow! I really took this to the heart and really never thought about the point your making before. But it is true. Some patriotic people just say ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Our Time Game Called Life

    Hello! This read was well worth while! I really relate to the message you are sending off and agree that life flies by way too fast! I'm not really looking ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Don't shred paper, shred waves!

    This format is so creative! I have never read anything like this before but i really like how you wrote this poem! I cannot fully understand the meaning in all ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Memories Past

    This is beautiful! I do not know if you did this intentionally, but the stanzas shorten towards the end and I feel like that has a meaning to it if ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Friday

    I do not know whether this is about a person with social anxiety or if it is about a person fighting depression. Either way, this poem is very deep. It ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Perfect Night

    Even though this poem is short, I feel as though that makes it all the more powerful. I love the meaning and point in this poem because i can relate ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Your weapon

    Reading this poem just made my day! I do not think your poem is cliche and neither should you, it is really good. I like how it is different because ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic Re: The World Is A Waste

    This poem is so well thought out! I really like the Diction you used in this, and I like the different lines. When you put lines with very few words ...

    Sep 14, 2015


People find it far easier to forgive others for being wrong than being right.
— Albus Dumbledore