Hey! I'm Kenzie and I really liked this literature poem you wrote. I think that the topic of it is very fascinating and full of truths and emotion. It is very wordy so I look at it and read it like a good story. You are very talented and this piece deserves credit for that. I like the diction you chose to write in this work, but I also really like how you made every word (even the beginning) lowercase. It really stands out and makes a statement. The transitional paragraphs from big to small is also very interesting as I did notice that pattern as well. And then the ending. That last line you start off with a Capital letter and it looks so out of place but maybe that is the whole reason you are putting it there, to make an impact? I am not for certain why you decided to do it that way all I know is that I like it. Good work, I cannot wait to see what you have in store to write in the near future!
-Kenz:)
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