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Re: Your Mouth Forms My Name
Hey I'm Kenzie! Wow! I think this poem is really fascinating and I love the way you portrayed it to your audience. The imagery of the word "fell" falling down ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: The Girl Who Wrote Symphonies
Hey! I'm Kenzie and I really liked this literature poem you wrote. I think that the topic of it is very fascinating and full of truths and emotion. It is ...
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Re: Do You Believe
This is beautiful. I am Catholic and also believe. But as everyone is their own individual, I believe some parts and do not believe other parts. Or in other words ...
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Re: Sad teens with happy faces- intro
This is very emotional work. There is much meaning behind it and even though it is dark, I like how there is hope. This is the kind of reading someone ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Sammy
WOW! ^^ my first reaction to reading this I myself love mystery and supernatural type reads and this was amazing! I do not have any corrections or suggestions only compliments. ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Help Me Calm Down
Hi there! Just wanted to leave some comments on your lyrics which i think are great! This would really make for a great song and the whole time i was ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: The who
Hello! I am not here for any grammatical corrections or suggestions (sorry!) for I am no English Wiz myself, but to simply say this story is fascinated! How sweet for ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: American Citizen.
This is amazing! Wow! I really took this to the heart and really never thought about the point your making before. But it is true. Some patriotic people just say ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Our Time Game Called Life
Hello! This read was well worth while! I really relate to the message you are sending off and agree that life flies by way too fast! I'm not really looking ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Don't shred paper, shred waves!
This format is so creative! I have never read anything like this before but i really like how you wrote this poem! I cannot fully understand the meaning in all ...
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Re: Memories Past
This is beautiful! I do not know if you did this intentionally, but the stanzas shorten towards the end and I feel like that has a meaning to it if ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Friday
I do not know whether this is about a person with social anxiety or if it is about a person fighting depression. Either way, this poem is very deep. It ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: A Perfect Night
Even though this poem is short, I feel as though that makes it all the more powerful. I love the meaning and point in this poem because i can relate ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Your weapon
Reading this poem just made my day! I do not think your poem is cliche and neither should you, it is really good. I like how it is different because ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: The World Is A Waste
This poem is so well thought out! I really like the Diction you used in this, and I like the different lines. When you put lines with very few words ...
Sep 14, 2015
