kelsey99

Tallis realized it was a mistake as soon as she turned the corner. But she had heard that blood curdling scream ricochet throughout the neighborhood and being the curious soul ...

Here's something I'm working on recently, it's not the first chapter on anything, in fact I reckon it's going to be one of the last chapters of a novel I'm ...

I really do like this piece. You first sentence I have nothing to complain about :) good job on that. alert, she [hears] a serpent crawling through the leaves. You ...

1. You might think with the Beats, “first word best word.” Then you pick up Morrissey’s Autobiography at page 108 and read, “…there is occasionally a strong and unsmiling teenager ...

It sits there like a photograph, a still life painted in the corners of my mind. Leaning closer, I brush aside the cobwebs and taste the colours on my fingertips; ...

This is a very interesting piece of work. It is kind of dark and has this side of people you don't see. “When you've lived as long as I have ...

I can't bounce or fly, While you're eating chicken thighs, I will always bounce you. This part quite confused me. "While you're eating chicken thighs." I don't understand what chicken ...

Analysis Results Overused Words Overused words Cliches & Redundancies Report Cliches Redundancies Pacing Report 0 slow pacing paragraphs found Writing Style Report No passive verbs found No hidden ver

Analysis Results Overused Words 3 issues Overused words (3) Cliches & Redundancies Report Cliches Redundancies Pacing Report 0 slow pacing paragraphs found Writing Style Report 3 issues No passive ver

Analysis Results Overused Words 1 issue Overused words (1) Cliches & Redundancies Report Cliches Redundancies Pacing Report 0 slow pacing paragraphs found Writing Style Report 5 issues No passive verb

I like it. It is very short. You over used the word that a lot. Your sentences are very long the 1st is 22 characters that targeted range is 11-18 ...

nice choice of vocabulary and details. great description. speading is spelled wrong. You also started 3 sentences with the same word :he. you should use other words than like and ...

I like your poem a lot. I can relate to it personally. Time flies by very quickly and i hate it. im about to publish a story called What If ...

I like your poem a lot. It is very descriptive. I'm about to publish my short story titled What If on here soon. It is about a girl who asks ...