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Hello there > 2nd & last line Second verse >> 1st & second to the last line The pattern of repetition (in the 3rd verse) isn't linear with the other ...

Hello there > "but aren't we strange?"

Hello there! I don't know if you'll still see this but I dug up the poetry section and found that you got only one review, and so I'm here to ...

Hello there I see this a lot Wrinkles, sags, gray hairs >> a quintessential description of old age Blood pumping through my veins >> I've seen this in romance novels ...

Hello there, Gem I actually love that touch because we all know that this "you" is anything but dear to the speaker, yet he/she chooses to use that endearment because ...

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Hello there, Gem! I haven't reviewed any of your poems even though you streamed-post most of them oof so I thought I'd give them a try. First of all, I ...

Hello there, dux! A bit of disclaimer but this girl's rusty and cramming. Your story captivated me because of the theme and woah, almost everything is relatable at some point. ...

Hellou there, Lia! Or should I say...nvm. I'd like to start off with a short disclaimer: this bby is so rusty and crooked when it comes to reviewing you can ...

Hello again (3x) !!! This part of the chapter didn't disappoint. It made the story much much more interesting. It amplified its potential! The use of the seven deadly sins ...

Hellooo again (2x) !! Now, this part was really interesting. I've gotten to learn more about what kind of character Cecilia is and so far, I like her. I can ...

Hello again! Wow, your post shrunk from about seventeen pages to two. Not to mention that there's very little things to critique. I'll start with your ending (I think that's ...