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junipers

"Every man's his own friend, my dear." -Fagin, Oliver Twist

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: the story of the stars

    Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I loved this! It was so good. I have read a lot of descriptive poems, but this is the best of the best! ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Among the Stars

    Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, I loved this! I think that you described the scene very well. I could vividly picture it in my head. ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: Stare

    Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I loved the mystique of this! It was pretty short, but it is pretty cool. I love how it talks about the sky. ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Ocean’s Herald

    Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I liked the stories descriptiveness, and its creativity but I have a few minor critiques. 1) This should have been separated into smaller ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Lion and the Sky

    Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, I loved how creative this was! I also loved the many different themes it had. Be content, knowing where you ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: just eat

    Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First off, I think you approached such a serious subject matter really well. It seems like you put a lot of thought into ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: i wish

    Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I loved this poem! I loved how you repeated "I wish" at the beginning of each line. It really makes the poem powerful. ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Waves and Winds

    Hi! I'm here for a quick review. I loved this poem! You had really good words. I loved how descriptive it was, and the questions it asked are the right ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Tide Goes Out (Chapter One)

    Hi! I'm here for a quick review. I loved how the book switched from one persons life to another! I loved the cliffhanger sort of things in the book. That ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Satire, Narrative Re: When Youtube had a Problem!

    First of all, hats off to your creativity! I liked how you made it seem like G+ was a bad guy. I also love how realistic it is. I can't ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stuck in your head

    Hi! I am going to write a short review here. I loved the mysteriousness and how it makes the reader cling to every word. I think that there were a ...

    Dec 5, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: I am Mari (Chapter 2)

    I loved this! The suspense, the action. I don't normally read stuff like this. But I loved it! I just feel like it was a little fast-paced. That is my ...

    Dec 5, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Brothers at Sea

    I loved this! The suspense, and the cliffhanger, and all of the detail! I love books/stories like this. I hope that there is a second part to this. I can ...

    Dec 4, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dead Night's Moonlight

    I loved this! I could picture the scene perfectly! I think you set that up very well. I felt like instead of writing this review I was looking at a ...

    Dec 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Focus

    I can completely relate to this poem! Especially during this time when you can't focus. Like, for example, schoolwork. I would rather be doing anything right now than schoolwork. I ...

    Dec 4, 2020


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