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Re: the story of the stars
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I loved this! It was so good. I have read a lot of descriptive poems, but this is the best of the best! ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: Among the Stars
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, I loved this! I think that you described the scene very well. I could vividly picture it in my head. ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: Stare
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I loved the mystique of this! It was pretty short, but it is pretty cool. I love how it talks about the sky. ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: The Ocean’s Herald
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I liked the stories descriptiveness, and its creativity but I have a few minor critiques. 1) This should have been separated into smaller ...
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Re: The Lion and the Sky
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First of all, I loved how creative this was! I also loved the many different themes it had. Be content, knowing where you ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: just eat
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. First off, I think you approached such a serious subject matter really well. It seems like you put a lot of thought into ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: i wish
Hi! Hannah here for a quick review. I loved this poem! I loved how you repeated "I wish" at the beginning of each line. It really makes the poem powerful. ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: Waves and Winds
Hi! I'm here for a quick review. I loved this poem! You had really good words. I loved how descriptive it was, and the questions it asked are the right ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: Tide Goes Out (Chapter One)
Hi! I'm here for a quick review. I loved how the book switched from one persons life to another! I loved the cliffhanger sort of things in the book. That ...
Dec 7, 2020 -
Re: When Youtube had a Problem!
First of all, hats off to your creativity! I liked how you made it seem like G+ was a bad guy. I also love how realistic it is. I can't ...
Dec 6, 2020 -
Re: Stuck in your head
Hi! I am going to write a short review here. I loved the mysteriousness and how it makes the reader cling to every word. I think that there were a ...
Dec 5, 2020 -
Re: I am Mari (Chapter 2)
I loved this! The suspense, the action. I don't normally read stuff like this. But I loved it! I just feel like it was a little fast-paced. That is my ...
Dec 5, 2020 -
Re: Brothers at Sea
I loved this! The suspense, and the cliffhanger, and all of the detail! I love books/stories like this. I hope that there is a second part to this. I can ...
Dec 4, 2020 -
Re: Dead Night's Moonlight
I loved this! I could picture the scene perfectly! I think you set that up very well. I felt like instead of writing this review I was looking at a ...
Dec 4, 2020 -
Re: Focus
I can completely relate to this poem! Especially during this time when you can't focus. Like, for example, schoolwork. I would rather be doing anything right now than schoolwork. I ...
Dec 4, 2020
