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Re: ch 2: A sudden shock
Hello! I'm Hannah. A belated welcome to YWS, too! I hope my review is helpful. Glows: Wow, this was deep! I like how in the first chapter you showed her ...
Feb 9, 2021 -
Re: Black Lives Matter
Hello! And, a belated welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here. I am Hannah. I hope my review helps! Grows: "Black Lives Matter" You don't need ...
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: The Other Side: Chapter 1: Missy
Hello, @sunlightwarriorxo! Welcome to YWS. Hannah here for a quick review! Grows: "Why you would even consider letting any of that go, is truly beyond me-”“Well maybe, I just want ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: The Artisan (Chapter One)
Hello Momo! Hannah here for a quick review. I really enjoyed this! I haven't written a review yet today and I am trying to do team Tortoise so I decided ...
Feb 3, 2021 -
Re: A bridge of old poetry aflame
Hello Liminality! Hannah here for a quick review. I would like to do team tortoise and haven't wrote a review for today yet so here I am! Anyways, lets get ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: World Peace
Hello! Hannah here for a quick review. I am attempting team tortoise this month and just realized that I hadn't written a review yet! Anyway, lets get to it. Grows: ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: First Love (3/3)
Hello, @Elinor! Hannah here for a quick review. Grows: I feel like it was a little fast paced, but that is okay especially if you wanted to just get to ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Conquest of Shadows Chapter 6
Hello! Hannah here for a quick review. Grows: "The rain came down in thick curtains as Richard trudged back to the mountain his clothes soaked through, his feet were heavy ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: The Tree On Mystic Road
Hello! I am Hannah. Welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here. Grows: This paragraph right here is a good example for grammar, punctuation and capitalization mistakes. ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: DUMB
Good Evening! Or whatever time it is in your part of the world. Anyways, Hannah here for a quick review! Grows: It seems like the man was a little too ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Destinies Eye
Hello Horisun! Hannah here for a quick review. Grows: "The door is locked; I can't get by Tug the handle; bang at the door Check the key hole; there's an ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: My Gecko
Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you have a great time here. I am Hannah. I haven't wrote a review in a long time, so it might ...
Jan 29, 2021 -
Re: Our World, my opinion (tell me your opinion)
Hello! Hannah here for a quick review. If you do not agree with my corrections, then ignore them. I don't know if the random capitalization in the sentences are supposed ...
Jan 12, 2021 -
Re: I am Mari (Chapter 4)
Hi Momo! Hannah here for a quick review. Sorry I'm late, I have been kind of busy. Mistakes: "business, ok?” he say." Say should be says. Also, it seems like ...
Jan 10, 2021 -
Re: The Surprise
Hello @LordMomo! Hannah here for quick review. What I like This was sort of like a fable, but real! I loved this. Great job! I loved the theme too. "Actions ...
Jan 6, 2021