Hello @Haileyg21! I'll be popping in here for a quick review. Hope you're having a wonderful day/night wherever you're at! Alright, let's hop right in.
As miss Spunky and Hannah mentioned below, there were several spelling and grammar mistakes, but as this piece is just voicing your opinion, I figured that you probably don't want me to go over that so let me just get right to the point.
There are a couple of things that I agree and partially disagree about certain subjects in here. Firstly, I'm gonna start with the first paragraph because... chronological order.
Yeah, it's scary and you never know when your days are just done. It could all be over in a matter of moments. It's even scarier to think about what your kids, or what your kid's kids, and so on, are gonna have to deal with.Living in our world today is scary. What if one day our oxygen just gives up? What happens to the generations after that? How do we as people make it so that we're ok mentally after we have set the future generations to the certain death we have?
Here's where the slight disagreement begins. Yes, it's important to be taking care of our environment, but we have to have and use our natural resources (**WITHOUT abusing and wasting them all). [quote= Genesis 9:3] Everything that lives and moves about will be food for you. Just as I gave you the green plants, I now give you everything. [/quote] I am morally fine with this, within reason. My grandpa always tells me-- anything in moderation is good.The farm land area that I was born to is now A large shopping center. A lot of the area around that is corporation buildings. I want the generations after us to know what it feels like to not cough when you enter a city. I want them to have clean water. To see forest that aren't apart of a park. I want them to climb trees and swim in rivers.
We as people have been killing the earth since we stepped our first foot on it. We killed animals, Nature, the water, the air and yet we're fine with it.
Yeah, some of it is wrong. And it's wrong that screwed up people are destroying the Earth. And I understand the point that you're trying to get at here, but not all of it is bad.I know that my generation has to see some idea that this is wrong. The earth that Nurtured us, kept our species going, is getting killed for no reason. We're doing something that is selfish. We're taking from the entire planet things that we way to much. We don't need everything we have taken yet we still keep taking. Its time we gave back. Its our time to prove to the world that We love it. Not just stand back as someone kills it. We need to go with the flow. Its 2021 and we're still not getting it.
Anyways, that's about all I've got to say for this piece

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