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"Every man's his own friend, my dear." -Fagin, Oliver Twist

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The Candle

    Hey SkyJade! Hannah here for a review :) I hope your day is going well and that this is helpful for you! First Thoughts: This was such an amazing read. ...

    Aug 20, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Williwaw Chapter 37

    Hi Messenger! Hannah here for a review. I haven't written one of these for a while, so it might not be perfect, but I hope it helps. Grows: I don't ...

    Jul 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Poem-Dreameror

    Hi Janhvi! Hannah/Star here for a review using the YWS S'more method. I hope that it's helpful! Top Graham Cracker: Impressions/Interpretations This is a beautiful poem about not being afraid ...

    Dec 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: If I spent a hundred years with you

    Hi! I hope you're doing well. Star/Hannah here for a review. I hope it's helpful! First Impression: This is a poem about love and loss. It was an accurate representation ...

    Dec 16, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: how i've been doing

    hi! starshipgirl (or hannah) here for a review. hope it's helpful! Overall Impression Whoa, this is heartbreaking! It was honest, and true, and felt real and raw. This is a ...

    Dec 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: raising dreams

    I saw this and was like "I'm going to write a review!" and then looked at it and realized that it was absolutely perfect and breathtaking and I couldn't possibly ...

    Jul 24, 2023
  • Short Story » Literature, Lyrical Re: The Tallest Tree

    hey evie!!! hannah here for a review. *tries to contain excitement* oMg this story is so amazing!!! it is so innocent and true-how its written almost like poetry-and the fact ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Of broken bottles

    Hi rida! Hannah here for a quick review. It’s been almost two years since I’ve done one, so wish me luck haha. Wow. That was an absolutely BEAUTIFUL poem. I ...

    Mar 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Health, Lyrical Re: At Home Evil

    Hello, @bipolarbear! A belated welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. Lets get on to the review! Glows: Wow, this was deep. You captured how no matter what ...

    Jun 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter-2.1

    Hello Alice! Hannah here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! :D Grows: “Leave this place , leave this place’’ Opa sobbed bitterly “Everything is happening because of ...

    Jun 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Speed of Light

    Heeello Lizzy! hannah here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! Grows: While this was a fun poem to read, I had trouble seeing how this line related ...

    Jun 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rainy Day

    Hi @1dratherbewriting! This is belated, but welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. I am hannah, and I hope this review is helpful! Glows: Wow, I liked this ...

    Jun 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Judge Me

    Hello, anne27! hannah0528 here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! Glows: Wow, this was a heartfelt poem. I can totally relate to people only seeing the worst ...

    Jun 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Bathrooms and Bad Zooms

    Hiya Beast! hannah0528 here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! Haha, wow this was hilarious! Recently my teacher has been kicking people who have there video off ...

    May 28, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ideas in the night

    Hi Phillauthet! I hope you are having a good morning/day/afternoon/night, wherever you are. hannah0528 here for a quick review. I hope it is helpful! Haha, wow. This was funny and ...

    May 25, 2021


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