Hi, I'm Anne here to review your work!!
Firstly, you've done a brilliant job. The poem really touched my heart. And I'll explain how.
MEANING
The meaning was illustrious!! Every cloud has a silver lining! I really liked the usage of rainbow. The description that colors give us just as much happiness as light does, and the supposed glum is not from lack of light but rather from continuous darkness was heartwarming and much appreciated. On the other hand, this poem could have also been effectively used to tell that sometimes, we feel great even in a storm. Since I find, looking at the rain very comforting. But I think, that might not have been the idea o the poem. Good job anyway!
LANGUAGE AND FLOW
The poem flowed smooth like butter.The structure was amazing as well. First happiness, then gloominess and lastly hope. It was very engaging to read it. The language was flawless. I din't however understand why the first stanza only had 4 lines. But maybe that was done intentionally.
Overall, the poem was really enjoyable. A rainbow in my rainy life. Thank you for writing it
And of course, keep writing
Points: 789
Reviews: 70
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