Hey there! Sofie here with a review
First off, I think you did a great job on this. The poem flows very well and is very lyrical, almost transfixing. I also like how you formatted it, too. It just serves the lyrical feel of the poem. I especially like the line;
"my mother and her mother before her,
our grandmothers and their grandmothers,
never forget: love
the mist that hangs in their throats,"
This just makes me think of family legacy and how we are all the products of many many generations.
Anyway, great job on this! Can't wait to read more from you
Sofia
Points: 51
Reviews: 77
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