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Re: First Snowfall
aw this is so cute. Christmas time really is so romantic and lovely, you captured that feeling. Here's some things that could make this even better: I wish there was ...
Oct 17, 2023 -
Re: Our Destined World
for some reason I'm obsessed with anything with human anatomy mixed with art, I love painting it and writing about it. So I'm a little biased in liking the imagery ...
Aug 19, 2023 -
Re: Reencarnacion
The way I see this poem is the writer feels they need to experience more tragic things in order to be interesting and creative. I really relate to this. It's ...
Aug 19, 2023 -
Re: Molly Davidson, you shattered soul
oh shitttttt. just came from your other origin story you posted. i love that you included pics, things like this inspire me as well. "Uncle Rhian replied, right before the ...
Jul 7, 2023 -
Re: Rhian Davidson, how you wanted to help
oh my god. this was so good. im such a sucker for stories centered around family dynamics and especially fatherhood, i also love horror. you're imagery was amazing, part of ...
Jul 7, 2023 -
Re: No matter the circumstances, love will always prevail
this was cute. it was relatable to me, although i am not a sea monster or a girlfriend who was eaten by one. im on a long trip away from ...
Jul 7, 2023 -
Re: Life on Mars
I'm not a big fan of sci-fi, but this did catch my eye. I liked the focus on the character Mark, and the whole short story being driven by his ...
May 24, 2023 -
Re: The Gateway (EDITED)- Part I
Usually, I would read something like this and not leave a review, because I did have a hard time understanding it. But, I feel like telling you what I think ...
May 24, 2023 -
Re: A Ticking Bomb
I love the conversation around phones, social media, modern technology, etc. I try to take breaks from my phone, and it really is an addiction. My anxiety gets worse when ...
May 24, 2023 -
Re: F*** You
This felt like a polished journal entry, you pouring your heart out quickly in an emotional way. However, the ending felt more calculated and sinister, like you have wiped away ...
Apr 7, 2023 -
Re: i wish you could hear my voice, even as i cry at my desktop
oh my godddd. I wasn't expecting much from this honestly, but damn it hit home. Crossing out "you've given me" to "I've given myself" is so real oh my god. ...
Apr 7, 2023 -
Re: Our little full time theatre
Ohhhh I like this. I love short poetry and to the point aha, I liked "we never rest, our beautiful performance" I feel like the whole poem is all about ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: Angel
I LOVE the horror genre, I feel like I can visualize the scenes the same way you do, so I see the story you want to share. However, I can ...
Apr 2, 2023 -
Re: Please don't be in love with someone else
Reading stories like this reminds me how I've never had an original experience. This story really put the feeling of caring for someone so deeply, and not wanting to. It ...
Jan 21, 2022 -
Re: I dreamt of nothing
"The dream was without color No color, not black not gray Definitely not white no color One color inverting the other" --------I like how you describe "nothing." This reminded me ...
Dec 28, 2021
