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jolene15

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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Look and listen

    o ok got it now thanks

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: LOst....

    Well I made it longer and a little better I think so feel free to reread it.

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Look and listen

    I liked a lot but there was a few spots that i got stuck on...but this part here confused me a little bit more= You break my hands, And with ...

    Jul 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: LOst....

    thanks

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Perfect world

    Wow I liked it but the begin kinda confused me a little bit.

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Great Wall Of China

    I like it a lot.

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bleed my love for you

    That sounded really sad and really amazing please keep wrighting.

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Society

    Really nice poem I like it.

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Silly Me

    Wow u already have a lot of reply's your famous lol anyways i really like your poem

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: War Never changes

    WOW i really like this its really good.

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Child of misfortune

    Its really good but it is kinda confusing at the beginning, other then that great job.

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: LOst....

    Thanks and okay its not one of my best but i posted it on here such to see what people would say i wrote it when i was 12.

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why Didn't I Listen?

    Its a good poem I like it.

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Am Dark, But There Is Hope

    This is amazing and very good I like it

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I don't know HELP

    Its okay thanks I will change that now

    Jun 20, 2011


There is nothing more radical or counter-cultural, at the moment, than laying down one’s cynicism in favour of tender vulnerability.
— John Green