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Re: Look and listen
o ok got it now thanks
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: LOst....
Well I made it longer and a little better I think so feel free to reread it.
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Look and listen
I liked a lot but there was a few spots that i got stuck on...but this part here confused me a little bit more= You break my hands, And with ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: LOst....
thanks
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Perfect world
Wow I liked it but the begin kinda confused me a little bit.
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: The Great Wall Of China
I like it a lot.
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Bleed my love for you
That sounded really sad and really amazing please keep wrighting.
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Society
Really nice poem I like it.
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Silly Me
Wow u already have a lot of reply's your famous lol anyways i really like your poem
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: War Never changes
WOW i really like this its really good.
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Child of misfortune
Its really good but it is kinda confusing at the beginning, other then that great job.
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: LOst....
Thanks and okay its not one of my best but i posted it on here such to see what people would say i wrote it when i was 12.
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Why Didn't I Listen?
Its a good poem I like it.
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: I Am Dark, But There Is Hope
This is amazing and very good I like it
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: I don't know HELP
Its okay thanks I will change that now
Jun 20, 2011
